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saying taeeun should "keep both the twins" is so weird considering he never showed any romantic interest on jaehoon at all. he had his eyes set on jaeyoung all the time. and also jaehoon attempted to babytrap him btw. just a few crying panels arent enough to erase that.
also i think the age is pretty appropriate and consistent?? considering taeeun's story is prolly around 13-15 years after the main story (wtf is a sophomore ), the great-grandmas being alive isnt really weird, esp considering them being really healthy in the main story. eunseo was also conceived when taeeun was in elementary school so like 7-8 years gap between them. she was kinda drawn like a little kid in early second story, but later looks like she's a preteen and she acts like one.
ok erm why am i making it make sense
i think the first story is really adorable. it was simple and enjoyable for a quick read that dont force you to stay awake to finish the drama. really nice simple read. i love their dynamic so much. they're such a perfect fairytale couple.
the second story... is weird, for lack of better words. the tone is so different than the first story, so it felt out of it. the simplification of an arc that could be its own long season. the sudden attempted assault that really didnt feel like it belongs to the storyline... (well, tbf eunhoo getting with taeyoon when he was in the rut at the start could be seen as assault, but it does have a different weight than what jaehoon tried to do). it just doesnt sit well to me how the author tried to cram taeeun's story in. idk. i love the main story tho.