
This one had some interesting enough little moments and enough personality to be worth the read for me, even with its pacing issues. Though the one thing that truly bothered me were the amount of inconsistencies in the plot…
Saying he can’t talk when in bird form, only to do it later. And that the magic whatever ring doesn’t work in the demon castle/grounds and then they use it there anyway. Also one character’s deep-rooted desire to punish himself mysteriously vanishes from his very being without any actual character growth. Basically, turn your brain off a little for this one, and it’s a nice and simple read
The sudden improvement in the art style for that special chapter was somehow very satisfying—even after the ill paced and unrelenting plot points.
It’s not an awful story, really. It simply suffers from being rushed, expositioning too much at once and not dedicating enough time to solidify one idea in the readers mind before moving on to the next