However now i know why im not satisfied reading both stories, the pacing is off. Like, too fast?? The emotional part is being glossed over/not explored well, and feels cluncky stiff...
Like it WILL be funny if there is NO RING, like ml is mad at some imaginary partner, and mc's pettiness could be justified like 'why are u accusing me out of nowhere'
However now i know why im not satisfied reading both stories, the pacing is off. Like, too fast?? The emotional part is being glossed over/not explored well, and feels cluncky stiff...
Like there are explanations for all the backstory, current timeline and all, i just don't feel satisfied Σ(  ̄□ ̄||)
hmm