there's a lot of saliva.... ┗( T﹏T )┛
Have you read the authors other works?
Saliva is good. Who doesn't like saliva? XD it keeps your mouth moisturized and you can moisturize other thing too XD
does this have yaoi themes to it? sounds a lil bit gay lol
i hope she makes a manhwa about the brother. he's a super piece of shit but it would be cool to have a story abt him when he's older and tries to become a better person but still has trust issues but less of a horrible person? anyways, this manhwa ripped my heart out. it was so beautiful idc if the ending wasn't wrapped up completely bc their relationship is beautiful.
ugh sometimes i hate how yaoi is lowkey super homophobic. its 2018 can we not use the slur f*g anymore or is that just me?
nah, not just you. but i think, in my general opinion, just like a normal or any other story there is a need of conflict. i.e the rising plot diagram theory where there is a beginning of the story the rising action and the solution. nobody wants to read a bland just sex yaoi no? that's not even borderline yaoi. that's pure hentai crap with shitty plot.
PS IM NOT MAD HAHA. JUST STATING MY OPINION. BUT NONETHELESS STILL AGREE WITH YOU. LOL
With the overall translation "quality" somehow I doubt the original text had that kind of connotation in the first place. As much as I'd like to commend OP's effort, it really is subpar.
I’ll second you on that, I can guarantee that 90% of the time a bl translation has f** in its bc of the translator when the actual text just said “homo” (which isn’t that much better but is still not as bad as f**)
i liked the first story. it was rly cute but i wish it was more kinky sorry not sorry lmao
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bitch... this creator's note better clear some shit up bc i do not fuck with the ending at all. horrible
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tbh for such an abrupt ending it was pretty good. i just wish there was one more smutty scene ╥﹏╥