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Hello! I'm posting my story ideas to see which stories I should make comics out of. The story I'm posting here is an old story about one of my many messed up oc's.
The genres for this are: Psychological, tragedy, horror, action, drama, and Yaoi.
Story base idea:
This story takes place is the 1920's with an mc named Conner Sinclair. Conner is a (now) 20 year old aristocrat whose friendly, very handsome, holds lots of parties, a playboy, and above all very religious.
A playboy whose religious sounds a bit out of place doesn't it? Well let me explain.
Conner's family appears normal, however upon further inspection the family is quite queer. (queer as in weird not gay haha. I'm using older terminology to fit the time.)
Conner's family is in a cult they believe is a religion. The cult has around 30 people. The family has made their fortune on selling a drug that makes you forget all your past and allows you to "see God". The family got hooked on these drugs themselves and now don't remember who they were, or where they came from. The family rely on the "church" for guidance because of this.
The church is a "safe place for everyone and anyone" that is their motto. People of all ages, genders, sexualities, race, etc. Boy's are treated better and gays are more accepted. The reason is that since they're not accepted by society the church can easily manipulate them. Men are more accepted because they hold mor#
power in society then woman.
The Sinclair's have been "blessed by the Gods" for being such devoted members. The blessing was that if their first born was a male then the son would become a holy being, maybe even a God. This way he'll become the leader of the church.
However the family wasn't blessed with a boy but a girl. The family named the girl Feji (which means mistake in danish ahaha). A year later Conner was born. With Conner being a second born this lowered his chances of becoming a God.
Furious the family and the cult took everything out on Feji. Feji was reminded every waking hour that she was a mistake that shouldn't have been born, that she will die a painful and meaningless death. Feiji became mentally ill from the verbal abuse and shunning. She would even have rocks thrown at her. (She was very, very, beautiful though.)
Contrary to Feji Conner was raised as if he was a God. Conner was loved by all and got everything he wanted. Conner thus became a narcissist with a God complex.
Conner was disgusted by his older sister and hated her. In his mind because of her, his spot was taken. Conner convinced Feji that if she killed herself feji would be forgiven by the Gods and finally be loved by her family.
Conner indirectly killed his sister. Conner felt great power over the fact he could so easily trick someone. This fed into Connors God complex. Thus unleashing a new desire within him.
That all happened when Conner was 16, hes 20 now and is in charge of the cult. Conner has killed multiple of people and tricked thousands.
Will Conner be caught and brought to justice? How did the cult start? What is the parents past? Were the parents always so heartless and awful? To find out please let me know what you think about this story!
This story is my least favorite, but it has so many details so I had to try and sum it up. I made another story that was super natural but someone said they don't like super natural so I posted this.
Again, please give me feedback! :)