This was such a fun ass read! When I say I enjoyed every moment of this, not a dull moment in sight. But for future readers, understand this is a kink-drivien story, and it doesn't take itself serious. It's truly a rom-com/hentai so if that isn't your thing, don't waste your time. Anyways, can't wait to read more from this author in the furture!
So I had to reread paragraphs multiple times because although the grammar and translation are pretty good, the story itself was somewhat confusing. However, I was still enjoying the story. What I ended up not liking is that the by the end the ending did not match what the author developed throughout the story. Im not bothered by a bdsm-type dynamic what I don't like it that the story felt disjointed and it honestly didn't fit their dynamic to me. It felt forced, as well as the author did not show any signs of either character turning out that way(except for those dreams which was nothing). The ending left me disappointed and not exactly excited for the next season, especially with the foreshadowing of all the dumb misunderstandings the couple will have. But who knows, maybe this is a diamond in the rough.
Also, these two guys look wayyyyyy too much alike
I can't be the only one who found this shit creepy as hell? Sure they're both "adults"(18 is barely an adult) however the way the top talked about the bottom always felt predatory . Such an uncomfortable read. I don't have a problem with age gaps usually but the way these two are portrayed, with the bottom being overly naive and "innocent," the top consciously manipulating the bottom to sleep with him, and how much his young age is brought up, just didn't sit right with me. It felt way to realistic to what ppl do irl.
i agree!! I'm super anti age gaps irl, but can excuse it in yaoi specifically because it's literally not supposed to be that deep. HOWEVER, it just felt so weirdly fetishistic about minato's age, which is hard to stomach if you're old enough (like me) to know 18 year olds ARE still kids mentally. kagami is 100% a predator in how he targets younger people specifically because he's into them being childish imo
I love this big beautiful blonde bombshell! I throughly enjoyed this story. My ONLY criticism is the story really didn't explore the dynamics behind why Noah killed Ryu. I wanted him to have to beg and plead for forgiveness, anytime they would get serious they would just end up having sex. I just wish Ryu was more vocal and adamant about his issues with Noah, or the bad shit that happened to him like the SA, child abuse, or how Noah just abandoned him. More effort should have been put into developing this, however this was a fun and easy read because it's genuinely well written with great art and great sexy scenes!
I didn't hate the main couple but I did find their dynamic boring after a while, and nothing transformative really happened between them. The side couple, however, were my faveeeeee. Their personalities and dynamics were so much more interesting and I even liked their looks better. Overall, the main story should have stay 40 chapters because it was needlessly prolonged. After the d.i.d guy merged, you fully realize how truly boring the main couple truly is, they have no substance but sex. Which is why the side couple was far superior.
Definitely Jae Pil + Hyunmin >>> from start to finish were so entertaining, exciting and lovable. They deserves so much more screentime!
My heart is utterly broken. I was NOT prepared to cry like this. :(