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It was really nice but by the last chapters everything became really messy though. I was kinda confused at some point but what was the deal the dude and his sister that had that power to enter the book. And why does she want the mc to leave the real world. What's his relation with that eunsung guy. However the story was quite fun to read.( ꈍᴗꈍ)
Even though I liked it quite a lot, I was kinda rooting for the mc and the mafia guy. Their chemistry was really fun too watch though. Even in the end I didn't expect the mafia guy to be the mc's friend though. And did the other guy that was mc's friend from the real world like the mc romantically?? Maybe I was just hopelessly waiting for them to be a couple¯_༼ ಥ ‿ ಥ ༽_/¯ (I'm rotten inside ig)(ب_ب)