
I really enjoyed the characters and story. Craig and Dean are adorable when they're together. I honestly didn't expect that diving into this. I thought this was going to be about how fucked up the relationship is and situation is. And how these two characters are obviously not right for each other but still end up together regardless. The seme usually being very aggressive/abuse to the uke. The uke having low self esteem and cant find himself to leave the seme because he is just so hot and just cant resist him. But I was pleasantly surprised. I love this couple and how adorable they are with each other. My main complaint is that the relationship felt a little rushed. I wish we could've seen these two get to know each other a little more. I felt that the Dean opened up a little to quickly to a stranger he just met not too long ago. I think that if he was a little more caution and cold with Craig at first and as he got to know him, he would started to open up as time goes by it would make a bit of a difference. Feel a bit natural, you know? And I feel as though they could have develop the side characters a bit more like the female president, the father and maybe Theo. Cause my god I hated that brat. Not as much though. But what do I know! Im not a writer. This is just my opinion and regardless I still really like this. Comment below and tell me what you think! Do you agree/disagree?

I didn't feel like Dean opened Up too quickly, actually i think that was because maybe Dean fell on love at first sight when he saw Craig. Ngl i thought this was gonna be a sad story and i had a sour taste in my mouth when i started reading it if you know what i mean (*killing stalking war flashbacks*) I was really surprised when i saw how fluffy the story actually was(~▰˘◡˘▰)~I'm happy i decided to read this :DD

If they weren't siblings I would have probably rooted for them. But due to them being related and one of them having a creepy obsession with the other. I cant find myself to do it. I wish that at the end they would realize that what they are doing isn't right and that its unknowingly affecting the people around them. Or if they got found out and they have to face the reality and consequences of their actions. But hey it's what I think. Comment if you feel the same or not.

To honest I actually enjoyed a bit of it. The story was simple and easy to follow. The incest bit doesn't bother me as much as I thought, in fact I actually thought the writer should have expanded on it. Like what if they were found out and how do the people around them act and feel about it. And add some bit of a dark factor to this. Since the brothers obsession is a bit creepy and concerning to say the least, its to the point where other characters including the parents start to notice quickly early on. This story could've taken some interesting routes. But hey, that's the messed up side of me talking.
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It irks me that rape is so normalized in this. This is one of the most if not the most toxic relationship Ive ever read. Why the fuck does the omega let Kieth get away with this behavior? The Omega should've just left Kieths abusive ass at that Island of his to rot. This should not be in the romance genre. Move it to the horror genre instead since it suits it better. This story makes Fifty Shades of Gray and 365 days look tame.

dude idk? it's not like i can contol a person like a robot and chose what they like to do. i'm complaining because they lack memtal maturity to understand that that's shit wrong and idc if he's hot. these literally never crossed their minds plus why add a r#pe scene in the first place? it's disturbing for both minors and adult to be reading this.
Man fuck blondie. Guy always actin as if he has a stick up his ass. Which I wouldn't be surprised if it was revealed to be the case. ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍