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The whole time reading this, I couldnt stop wondering if the author is/was pissed off at someone and is having all of their anger be taken out on Dan??? I mean, seriously, I have never seen two characters that were so incompatible in my life, like how could this possibly be considered a romance, let alone a GOOD romance, in every sense of the word? The main character - who's dumb and naive - experiences SA, violence, abuse, and is treated like/is literally labeled as a tool (SO romantic) by the one guy that's supposed to be the ML - who's an egotistical POS for ~30 (around THIRTY) chapters in, but then what, they're supposed to "fall in love" 30-50 chapters after ALL OF THAT? Idk when the actual "love" is going to happen, if at all, if you can even call it that, but like what??? I just don't see how the story could venture into a romance at this point and have it make sense, after everything, because stockholm syndrome does not = romance. And the whole "I hAvE a JiNx" is such BS, he's just a famous, entitled rich guy with a sex addiction lol.
Anyway idk I'm just going to drop this, unless they introduce a second guy that's more loving, genuine and considerate of Dan, which is highly unlikely, I'm sure. I personally just don't find seeing Dan, or any character in a story, experiencing and going through what he has in this story to be entertaining in any way at all, and there's no going back since that line has already been crossed in the way that it has. So, yeah, reading this has been a weird, confusing, comedic yet mildly annoying and unpleasant experience for me personally. I skipped a lot of the times when Dan and Grosskyung were "together" so I guess that's how I was somehow able to make it through the chapters so quickly, despite how confused I was trying to find even a shred of romance in this thing, then giving up on that and being confused about how this could possibly be properly categorised as a romance...