Aeistz's Topics (185)

Mhmm there’s not much that engages readers into the story and makes us anticipate what will happen next... I wonder what went wrong in the story telling? Is it the misproportion head and body and makes them all look like 9 year old kid in elongated body or just the villain emperor isn’t even realistic and his character seems too flat... I was expecting someone who was able to wait 10 years to kill her mother and grandpa to be more cautious and quick mind making him a stronger antagonist rather than this short sighted egotistical dude

Tf is u talking abt

Tbh, your english gave me cancer

Loll I was just analytically giving you a reason that might have made you think the story is boring. I didn’t explain in depth onto each points since I was expecting you to understand what I meant by flat character without any dynamic. A lot of well known good story her something to do with their realistic and logical portrayal on top of making characters, especially the main character, relatable and understandable. There are journals on breaking down author’s writing and story telling and these points are often times mentioned and pointed out in their analysis. Thought a lot of times, stories that are able to make it big also rely on luck and how receptive the audience is to the story. You can have a great litrpg story yet the fandom and readers are more into thriller genre on whatever site they posted on or something.

If your were referring to what I was talking about. Just to remind you, I was replying back to your topic in “Two Faced Princess” in which u called it boring and I was agreeing with you.

First of all, you suck at english
If you made an essay you'll probably get an F
There are many unnecesary and unneeded words at your comments, you're just wasting your time bruh

This isn't a speech, calm down

It’s not a speech though? I just don’t get why you got so defensive in the first place? I figured it was nice someone also thought the story was boring and just want to share what was wrong with the story unless you actually liked the story?? And please don’t use ad hominem statement to attack my English any further because you already, in fact, twice LMAO

No, no, i apologize if i offended you. I didn't intended to. Very sorryyヾ(❀╹◡╹)ﾉ~

Who

The fl

who else honestly

Well she has the mentality of an adult ofc she won’t act like the heroineknowing the original story I don’t get yall

She doesn't really think of the bunny's feelings and is fucking obsessed with the plot.

She only sees the world as the novel and and the people in it as the 'characters'

Idk she's just stupid in various ways.

i agree, it’s like she hasn’t accepted that the world she lives in is indeed reality

gago ahahahahahahhaha