I could never express hoe much I love this story, so I'm just gonna leave that here.
And the arts at the end of each chapter give me so much life, I want more of them.
The guy who took the picture does really think just cuz u talk to a girl that makes u a cheater. He's got some serious issues. Aside from the fact that our MC isn't even in a relationship to begin with (or wants anything from the girl his sister likes, the girl likes him). Poor sister though ;;
About the bitch: It was so obvious she'd be trouble.
First of all, you talk to him after years but not to apologise for your stupidity as a child (as a kid you do lots of stupid shit, so I wouldn't hold that over her) but bc he's handsome "now" and you wanna be with someone handsome?
So my first issue is the reason she started talking to him. My second is the fact that she said that TO HIS FACE not knowing something like that hurts?
She's a bitch. And in the last panel it looked like she was contemplating wether to get together with our MC or the Music guy. What a bitch.
"There was nothing else I could do [...] That reminds me, where is Chris?"
So Chris was an afterthought? I thought you hurt yourself to safe him, so why is he an afterthought?
Aside from that I found some other inconsistencies in this chapter and it's annoying me.
The poor man got mistreated by his collegues so bad that he got trust issues.
And he seems to really worry for thst new employee. I hope the new guy is doing well there (which is unlikely). So he'll either end up like our MC or is/ will be an asshole like the others.
This chapter was stupid.
First of all, why are there just huge stones lying around (may be normal for a beach but I wouldn't know, I find it sus though)?
Secondly NOBODY would be gathering around a scene of fighting if one person had a GUN in their hands! You don't know why their fighting. He could be a crazy person, you could die. Nobody does that!
Thirdly, I mean, Yoon tries to save Chris and he likes Vasiya which is why he's trying not to anger him but if MY FRIEND WAS LYING ON THE GROUND WITH THEIR HEAD FCKING BLEEDING you best believe I'll hit every asshole that would try to get me away from them. How could Yoon react so chill? "Oh no, he doesn't want me to stay with my best friend who could have serious head trauma"
And Chris being "okay" bc he mumbled about killing Vasiya, mmh, yeah, no. He always does that. Him saying that does NOT mean he's clear headed.
AND THEN, Yoon FCKING HITTING HIS OWN HEAD. Now, I could be wrong, but I would assume Vasiya would rush him to the hospital in his own car.
That doesn't change the fact, that Yoon should have put his foot down when it came to staying with his injured friend. That would've made mlre senseI'd be fcking livid if my friend left me alone, hurt just to not anger (or make jealous) their partner.
Semes not respecting their Ukes boundaries is nothing new and I partly don't mind it but Yoon HURTING himself for Vasiya to understand he wants to stay when he could've just used his words is shitty in my opinion.
Now this is the first time I'm ranting like this but I had to get this off. Wtf. I hope next chapter won't be free from logic. I couldn't enjoy the chapter because of these reasons but I'm pretty sure most of you did and I'm NOT saying anything against that. This is a great story but this was just not a great chapter for me.
i agree with everything u said. like he was so mellow and basically went along with vasiya while chris was literally bleeding. the only thing getting me through is that it’s in florida, so truly anyhting could happen
Ima just go down your list
1. Near the ocean in Florida there’s a lot of rocks depending on where you go like Miami there not big but just about the size of a regular hand and smaller they are spread out through out the sand so sometimes you can’t see them until you step on one (╯°Д °)╯╧╧
2. Like the first comment says this is stupid ass Florida so if there’s a fight people are gathering... not that close but they are there and recording even if there’s a gun they don’t run until it gets shot (happened in a club I went too after my friends finally persuaded me to go out best believe I won’t be leaving my house again)
3. I don’t think Yoon realizes he likes vasaya yet and he doesn’t want to anger vasaya because he’s scared of what he can do chris is bleeding on the floor and he wants to help so he’s begging to stay as long as he can so he’s sure his friend is ok but as you saw vasaya wasn’t having it so the most rational thing for Yoon to do in his mind was injure himself since it looked like vasaya was really worried about him( I’m not sure how that turns out since you know... the next chapter isnt out but yeah)
4. I think he was just trying to find the calm in the chaos when he made that comment about Chris mumbling atleast that’s how I took it it’s like he’s thinking “even though he got injured probably severely he’s still thinking about ways to kick vasayas... butt” but yeah that’s how I saw it
5. I already explained my assumption on hurting himself but about vasaya taking him in his car I think now I’m only assuming but I think vasaya will take care of Chris too since he is seeing the lengths Yoon would go for his friend idk just a guess, and as I said before Yoon is still very scared of vasaya so his methods of helping also saves his own life too I think in his mind what he thought was I would rather an injury then completely loosing my life Yoon knows vasaya loves him but he’s not sure how much or to what extent
So I see your points but I just wanted to share how I was seeing it maybe it could make you see it differently... or not but yeah (￣∇￣")
Fr tho thts wht i was thinking tf chris deserves better...also why tf did he hit himself in the head....wouldnt vasiya take him away to get treatment and in the proccess leaving chris alone...dammit i only care about chris the rest of thw charecters can die in a ditch for all i care
Smh one of the problems is that vasya has never given yoon a reason to trust him to listen to his words. Vasya only thinks about what he wants himself period.
yknow what these are all pretty good justifications :00 florida do be wilding lmao
Thank you for your informstion with the first few points. I understand what you mean kn nr 4. That could very well be it. Yoon reassuring himself like that. I also understand your opinion but just hope next chspter maked more sense.
Florida is toxic
And yeah maybe it will be more clear next chap
It should be illegal hoe short these chapters are. They should make me feel fluff and not agonzied because I want more （/TДT)/