It was chaotic and somehow rushed at some parts. There were also parts where some events didn't make sense. Like it just ended suddenly and all of a sudden, there's something else going on. But I still stayed. Because I enjoyed the green flag seme. He was indeed despicable for planting false evidence against his elder brother but I think it was justified. The brother smashed with a golf club which sent him to the hospital (though I can't remember if the reason for that was discussed in the earlier chapters) but still, the elder brother is an idiot. Anyways, I enjoyed it. And I'm hoping for some side stories like their visit to America. I wanna see the interaction between the mother and Piljoo.
6/10
Holy shit! It ended just like that! I want more! How can you keep me hanging! I still want more! I want to know who really killed him? Was it really the brother? That innocent looking freckled face? Ugh! Is there side stories? Pretty pleaseeee I need more!
Pffft! It’s so chaotic! The crow knew something was going on lols
Why do you just keep on hurting me? What did I ever do to you? Pleaseeee save him!!!! His misery is my misery! Give him a break please (╯°Д °)╯╧╧
This tale is verily wondrous! I did peruse the comments, and it appearith that the readers have been swayed by this manner of writing. I did read comments penned in olde English, and 'tis most delightful to behold!
Get out
loooolll
lmaoo
I have had quite the laugh...I have found your writing very amusing XD
This tale is verily wondrous! I did peruse the comments, and it appeareth that the readers have been swayed by this manner of writing.
I wished they'd switch. This is good. But I feel like it wasn't enough. I wish for more. Like getting closure from his family. Did his parents really divorced? I feel like there's a lot that left unanswered.
I'm getting anxious over these guys.