It was chaotic and somehow rushed at some parts. There were also parts where some events didn't make sense. Like it just ended suddenly and all of a sudden, there's something else going on. But I still stayed. Because I enjoyed the green flag seme. He was indeed despicable for planting false evidence against his elder brother but I think it was justified. The brother smashed with a golf club which sent him to the hospital (though I can't remember if the reason for that was discussed in the earlier chapters) but still, the elder brother is an idiot. Anyways, I enjoyed it. And I'm hoping for some side stories like their visit to America. I wanna see the interaction between the mother and Piljoo.
6/10
Holy shit! It ended just like that! I want more! How can you keep me hanging! I still want more! I want to know who really killed him? Was it really the brother? That innocent looking freckled face? Ugh! Is there side stories? Pretty pleaseeee I need more!
Pffft! It’s so chaotic! The crow knew something was going on lols
Why do you just keep on hurting me? What did I ever do to you? Pleaseeee save him!!!! His misery is my misery! Give him a break please (╯°Д °)╯╧╧
This tale is verily wondrous! I did peruse the comments, and it appearith that the readers have been swayed by this manner of writing. I did read comments penned in olde English, and 'tis most delightful to behold!
Get out
loooolll
lmaoo
I have had quite the laugh...I have found your writing very amusing XD
This tale is verily wondrous! I did peruse the comments, and it appeareth that the readers have been swayed by this manner of writing.
He was so happy MC got jealous. How satisfying seeing that shock on his face. Lmao. Coax him now! (︶︿︶)＝凸