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The girl is naive and the story is shallow, like every emotion has been sucked out of it. My biggest gripe is she never finds anything concerning:
Nearly get killed by a monster - (▰˘◡˘▰) No worries. Has fallen down a hill for unknown reasons leading to a coma - ╮(￣▽￣)╭ Not my problem...that was OG FL. "Friend" being weird as hell and did some crazy shit? - (⌒▽⌒) It's fine, I'll just go meet her at a cliff.
Like what????