About a man who is gaslit by everyone around him to think he’s wrong and crazy as his autonomy is slowly stripped away. Mother sells you to the royal family, collects checks you’ve never seen a scent of, and lies about your gender? It was for your own good and you’re ungrateful. What do you mean not knowing put you at risk? THAT’s why the royal family said they would protect you… from the harm and media storm THEY cause. He’s obviously not being rational about this.
He wants to stay in college and not get pregnant? Is he crazy? That’s a selfish thing to do, he’s not even thinking about how that would make the fiancé he just met feel or the danger he would be in… because of the lies and said fiancé. He’s clearly not thinking rational since becoming an omega. Hopefully spousal training, preparing him for his wifely duties will set him straight.
For now he can be indulged and allowed to go to college. Just until he gets pregnant of course, which will be soon obviously. What a crazy guy, not even considering how his fiancé feels about him getting an education or that could impact his true future career. Baby maker.
The art is so sketchy and unfinished I wondered if this was a beta test before the official release.
This art shows that if you want to make a webcomic, just do it. Not good at art or comic paneling? Doesn’t matter. The only thing stopping you is YOU. Who needs talent when you have ~passion~
If the FL had an ounce of agency or personality. She doesn’t do anything the entire story except exist and have sex. She gets an incredible power and does nothing with it. Instead of her “writing her own story” it’s used as a quick and easy way to fix the relationship between her and the ML. Like, she didn’t even try to use it that way on her own, it just happened. The only interesting thing she’s ever done was the backstory where she saved ML as a child. But then we see none of that bravery or even quick wit later. Just a let down. She could be replaced with a very sweet pet and nothing but the sex would change.
Usagi Otoko Tora Otoko. They have similar premises, but I like the art and comedy of Usagi over this one. Also I think it does a better job with balancing the yakuza concept with a normal person. It’s not perfect but I recommend checking it out if you like yakuza x doctor who saved their life premise.
They really tricked me in the beginning into thinking the MC would have a backbone and be self sufficient and cool. First responder lycan who is strong, brave, and won’t let a past, failed love walk all over him? NO. Just another damsel in distress doormat. Boy, do I feel like a fool.
If ML had met another 1/1 Haram that reminded him more of his imaginary friend, not just a blond, he never would have went back to uke. Felt less like he genuinely loves uke and more like he slowly realized uke was the closest he was going to get to his fantasy. And since he loves his imaginary friend he must “love” the closest thing available. It’s too wrapped in delusion to feel genuine.
Just feels like they went back to the start. ML’s toxic mindset in the epilogue, testing uke’s affection by seeing how far he can push him during sex, doesn’t help. Unfortunately this story fell into the same pitfall as many other BL where sex takes precedence over story. Hence why even after the breakup they continued having sex, because heaven forbid we go more than 5 chapters in this psychological drama without a smut scene. I can see why some people might like this, but it just fell short and was unsatisfying for me.
They’re dating. They like each other. There was NO reason for ML to rape the MC? It came out of nowhere and was glossed over to a degree that it didn’t need to be there at all. Also, MC is not the kind of guy who would so easily forgive RAPE after a single pouty look from ML. Even ignoring the overuse of rape as a cheap way to have 2 characters bang without needing to build chemistry… this story DID build chemistry and it just doesn’t work narratively after the growth of MC and even ML. It’s bad writing.
This is like if the author read Okane Ga Nai and felt inspired~ like the character dynamic AND wonky sizes have the same vibe, even the uke’s prepubescent femme design is similar. Tho they somehow wrote a worse seme than Kanou (not an easy task)
Really want to get into this, 20 chapters in. But the FL is so stupid it’s haaaard. She knows her brother KILLED her in her previous life, plotted the war. She does absolutely nothing with this information after coming back to life. She doesn’t put eyes on him, doesn’t make sure she knows of the secret meetings with other kingdoms. Doesn’t try to find out who the mage who helped kill her was. Doesn’t do anything toward him to put herself in a better position information or power wise. Yet she’s FAR more distrustful to Canach who only went to war after she was killed. Like, her entire plan, for 20 years. Was just… hope her brother doesn’t kill her this time? Because she has magic she used for border walls. Marry the same man with 0 planning ahead and hope for the best? All that build up for her to have NO plan. That was a wasted 20 years.
The comments hype her up but I’m just not seeing it.
We don’t know what MC did that hurt the ML so badly it 180’d his personality. He’s not in a relationship, so he’s free to sleep with who he wants. Plus it seems like his way of keeping people at a distance due to past trauma. Gonna wait and see how badly MC fucked up in the past OR if ML is blowing it out of proportion and being needlessly petty, before making a judgement. It’s too soon to call imo.
So he’s doing this so his picture won’t get leaked… but he’s going to have live sex with only a tiny mask covering his lower face? If he was cool with having sex for money, even being filmed why does he care about a picture being leaked he could claim as fake or even report as revenge porn? How is this uke in college, he has no brain.
Not saying in a bad way. I think the plot is supposed to be as dumb as possible in order to get the sex going. Like the “sorry pizza man, I don’t have any money, can I pay you with something else…” that level of writing.
If it was the guy acting the way she was for 9 years, needlessly cruel bc “deep down I love them” people would be ragging on the male lead. Dunno why the FL gets a pass for the same toxic behavior.
Either the author abruptly dropped the work or the scan team did bc ch27 still ends with a “to be continued”. And I still can’t get over how the story keeps brushing aside “yeah we abducted and tortured children, even killing some, buuuuuut we feel a little bad about it now?” Why even include those characters or plot line if it’s resolved with a “my bad”.
If you plot to get someone drunk just so you can have sex with them, when you know they would not otherwise consent. That’s rape. Don’t know why this needs to be explained.
This entire vacation is just another plot to rape Mokwha. How are people romanticizing it?
Edit: why are you booing me, I’m right?