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Really want to get into this, 20 chapters in. But the FL is so stupid it’s haaaard. She knows her brother KILLED her in her previous life, plotted the war. She does absolutely nothing with this information after coming back to life. She doesn’t put eyes on him, doesn’t make sure she knows of the secret meetings with other kingdoms. Doesn’t try to find out who the mage who helped kill her was. Doesn’t do anything toward him to put herself in a better position information or power wise. Yet she’s FAR more distrustful to Canach who only went to war after she was killed. Like, her entire plan, for 20 years. Was just… hope her brother doesn’t kill her this time? Because she has magic she used for border walls. Marry the same man with 0 planning ahead and hope for the best? All that build up for her to have NO plan. That was a wasted 20 years.
The comments hype her up but I’m just not seeing it.