Is it so hard to write an FL with an ounce of self respect? Do people really enjoy reading about doormats?
This is building to MC growing so mentally unstable and desperate not to be left he attempts a murder-suicide with ML. Only ML survives but instead of it pissing him off, it’s his “oh shit, he’s the one” moment. Bc they’re both freaks
In-Seob might be the most pathetic uke I’ve ever read, and I’ve read Okane ga Nai. How does Ayase have more of a spine? Like this plot only works bc the author gave Seob the emotional memory of a half-dead goldfish. He’s inconsistent between chapters.
He feels like a broken man. He’s just resigned to his fate, not happy but too used to his majesty to be truly miserable anymore. I hope he tries to leave again or at least makes ML suffer literally any kind of consequence, but there might not be enough will inside MC left to care. Very sad ending but kind if realistic when a commoner is cornered by that kind of political and monetary power.
MC is a literal rape magnet like what. At this point I wouldn’t be surprised if it turned out his supernatural ability was making dudes horny. Like it’s getting more and more absurd.
It’s called Feel Betrayal, which Snow hasn’t felt yet, he’s still pretty lethargic to the whole situation. I bet the real betrayal won’t come until he reciprocates Handsome’s feelings.
The author really had the victim comforting the RAPIST mere minutes after being raped. Very ew. Like are we supposed to feel bad for the ML? At this point I’m surprised the author hasn’t had the MC struggle with asphyxiation after forgetting to breath he’s so dumb. (I blame the author, the only way they can even remotely pretend this will have a romantic ending is by giving the MC the emotional memory of a goldfish)
Author is giving MC the emotional memory of a goldfish. Why is he letting the ML off and no longer focusing on the ya know, rape that was never really apologized for?? Like for once the MC wasn’t pretending like the rape never happened and then suddenly he WAS? Also ML basically kidnapping the MC’s grandpa and holding him hostage? But NOW the MC’s only problem with them being together is their social stations and “he’s not worth it”????
UGH THIS COULD HAVE BEEN SOMETHING
Dan still doesn’t have a spine and hasn’t reflected AT ALL on how he was treated! Feels like nothing is going to change when he inevitably goes back, because he didn’t leave bc he’d had enough, but because he was told to nooooo.
Are we supposed to feel bad for the alpha? Maybe author shouldn’t have written him to both see and use omegas as nothing but objects who has not and does not see anything wrong with his behavior toward them. But just the ONE he (kinda) fell for (debatable).
Best ending is his painful, miserable, prolonged death.
The author did a really good job making me not give af about the top or what happens to him.
The author is really going out of their way to make the uke using his position to rape the seme 10 times sound cutesy by calling it a dine and dash and acting like it wasn’t literal rape.
And how many times has he done this and to how many people? Somehow they made the uke more of a monster than the yakuza top. And all rather unintentionally, author doesn’t seem to consider the uke worse than the seme.
Kinda feel like the uke took stupid pills toward the last third of the story. Like bro please, at least try to use a LITTLE critical thinking skills.
Author really went out of their way to make JJ irredeemable. Like he is so shit and doesn’t deserve MC. Hope they DON’T get back together and MC finds someone who will actually communicate and treat him with respect and lives his best life with him. And then JJ just cries in a corner realizing what he lost and how much he fucked up.
There is absolutely nothing stopping him from coming up with a little plan to avoid getting on the plane last minute and calling his parents to beg them to buy him a plane ticket home. Like in an airport there are SO many options and it’s very easy to hide. If only the dumb shit had a brain, or a spine, alas. Feels like I’m reading about a goldfish and it’s abusive owner.
Coulda been at least a fun toxic trash if the teacher had ANY personality outside of “me horny” like she only thought with her clit, which made the blonde’s obsession feel out of place. Decent character design wasted