This story is ass.
SOOO CRINGY I was trynna give the story a chance but all I got was a bunch of rape and that’s not really a criteria I like to be in nor anyone should be in. The story’s got no plot, it’s just rape everywhere and they all just suck. I need more stories with actual plot, genuine characters with understandable and realistic behavior and issues with good character development and making proper adult decisions like??
Yall forgot uke is into BDSM and is a masochist. Seme is only doing what uke enjoys lol
I would disagree. He might enjoy the physical pain but seme seems to be rejecting the uke's pleas for emotional connection. They're sppsd to b in a relationship no? It's not a bdsm service.
The lines r blurry tho. If at the end of it, uke derives pleasure fr the emotional domination then fine. But it doesn't seem like that's how it's going...
I wish storytelling was a bit more coherent. So everybody came for his birthday. He wasn't there as he was out investigating her disappearance. Then suddenly he enters the yard with his Right Hand... Is this after his party with other lords? Or did he just return from his investigation? Was he intoxicated? How much time has passed? Its not apparent from panels nor is it indicated in any way. This isn't the only instance the storytelling lacks these cues. It's like it's implicit, and author expects us to fill in the blanks even tho it's not that clear











Bahahahahaha no fucking way that's the ending anyone getting started to read this, don't bother