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It was an engaging plot, even though I started reading for the smut, I kind of wish the plot would have been developed a little more. I guess it’s too short to do much about that though.
I normally hate miscommunication/lack of communication conflicts but this one actually makes sense at least on woowons end, like okay I guess his dad would be hard to talk about so it makes sense he would hide it. Why the hell seo an wouldn’t tell him about moving overseas in a year I don’t understand though. Like he could have refused just as easily when everything is organized? It just doesn’t make sense. Like before he was thinking that woowon would be fine with it so why does he tell him he thought he wouldn’t get the answer he wanted??