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I see a lot of these side whispering in these stories. I don't know if I've seen too much of someone calling these Whisperers out with a "If you have something to say, then speak up. Say it to my face." I can't STAND IT when a character lets those persons talk under their breath. It aggravates me. As a Professor, I would've spoken up to those students:
Student: "Wait, shhhh...he's gonna hear us!"
Professor Me: "Of course! It's not like you were quiet about it. Since you like whispering behind people's backs, write me a 6 page essay on "What being Messy Is." and turn it in by the end of the week. Now, who else wants to whisper?" Something like that.
Also, I know MC must've had some type of trauma from that silver haired bastard, but I would've just got up and walked out of the class as soon as that sonovabitch stepped in the room. I hate that he stirred MC up so much that he fainted. With the Professor acting the way he did, I'm sure the sonovabitch is gonna find out about their relationship and do something against them.
Lastly, this "Jay" person? Yeah. Wouldn't it be great if it was actually Professor? Because of his father, he put himself behind an alias and built a reputation for himself. The sonovabitch wants to work with "her" so bad, only come to find out that it's the brother he's jealous of. OR "Jay" really is a woman, BUT she knows Professor and only wants to work with him. Both scenarios would be cool.