I.....I just dont understand anything thats going on in this story and I dont know/cant remember who everyone is. I think Beelzebub is the Pink hair one, ut.thats all who I.know. I feel really stupid, but I'm glad it seems like I'm not the only one.....maybe?? Maybe I should go back and read from the start or maybe let this marinate and then come back and read it again. I don't know. *shrugs* I hate this bc the art is so pretty.
If anybody would like to explain to me what's going on, I would appreciate it.
Okay....soooo, I recognize that this was a wild one and fucked up on a few levels....BUT....I cant bring myself to hate it. *hides*
Why?
Because it reminds me of me. Reading this felt like a fanfiction I would have written years ago and then came across it today, while cleaning out my jump drive, and cringing as Im reading it, going, "The fuck was I thinking..?" Especially at the Seme during the sex scene. I hope I'm a better writer now, compared to then.
Anybody see in Chapter 2, at the beginning-middle part when they're toddlers or 5y/o or whatever, Darion is kissing Gill's forehead while balancing on the very tips of his toes? Lol. I don't know whether to be impressed or find it adorable....or both.
Yall....please tell me I'm not the only one who burst into a fit of gleeful giggles when Taemoon, who was posted up on his knees, naked as all get out, and waving his fists back and forth like a toddler during a temper tantrum, started yelling, "I DIDNT SQUIRT!!"
And please tell me I'm not the only one imagining Seonwoo looking at Taemoon with that, "You like Krabby Patties, dontcha' Squidward?" look on his face. lmaoooo
me tooo lmao he looked so adorable and goofy
Only our Seonwoo can bring that out of Taemoon.
I got excited....all for me to get let down bc there's no new chapter. Not even a PH.
And here I thought my mental illness fucked me up in the head, but naaaah. After reading the Boss's story, I came to the conclusion that the Author's got me beat. Which leads me to this question: Is the author okay? And there's an editor somewhere that OK'd these side stories. Are they okay too? Do we need to check up on them? Make sure they are (mentally) stable and that "all their lights are on upstairs", if you know what I mean.
Just read the Het. Story Nellie's Secret Garden and it was straight trash. That Author needs to take pointers from this Author so they can know how it's (a PWPBWAAP aka Plot-what-plot-but-with-an-actual-plot) really supposed to be done.
Is it just me or is this a literal porn movie...just drawn? It's not even a PWP kinda story. It's something you'd find on pornhub or faphouse. And we already know the acting is as horrendous as what's written here.
There's an author that actually sat down and wrote this and an editor that read this and said, "YES, let's publish this!" So....are they okay? Anybody checked up on them? Maybe a Wellfare Check or something?
So, he didn't make her an honest woman in the end? Even during that time, it would've been okay for them to wait a couple of years after the husband's death and then get married. Marriage between In-Laws happened all the time, at least to keep the family name.
So, the Author did a cop-out, yeah? They killed the FL at the end. Bc their brain was probably rotten by this point so, they killed her and then him and ended the story.
Did she really say/think this??? "My world is shaking....my lips....my nipples...my clitoris..." Uh, DUH ya ditz. Ya gotta whole ass diamond ring randomly stuck to your clit that apparently vibrates controlled by his ring.
For real tho....how did it stay around her clit?? Again magic? Really wish the Author could've explained that or whatever. The damn thing was just....there....STUCK. Flies don't even stick to shit tighter than that ring stuck to her clit.
Anyway....I had a good laugh tho.
Babe, yes it's porn. And yes, turn off your brain before read porn.
I HAVE QUESTIONS.
The ring took me out--I couldnt concentrate on the story. Swear, after that, the rest of the chapters had me thinking, "How tf did that ring stay on her clit??" If it's magic, then.....then is that how it stays?
And how did she squirt on the first try? He just tongued her too. Didn't stick it at all, yet she squirted her ass, er, pussy off.
And why am I even reading this?
Hahaha.... your comment just made my day. I think you forgot to turn off your brain before reading it. (≧∀≦)
Hehehe glad it made your day. And *snaps* THAT'S what I should've done. Turn my brain off....which is exactly what I'm about to do before this final chapter that I can't believe I'm still going to read.
(▰˘◡˘▰) the ending was unexpected, wasn't it?
So....fuck the eldest younger brother (dumbass could've just said younger brother) and fuck that other asshole, too. I'm not gonna call him a "father" because he never was a father to our Arush and he doesn't even deserve to be Arush's father.