
Haven’t read this yet. I’ll wait for more chapters and then it has a low rating, which kinda tells me what I need to know about this story, BUT I’ve been wrong before (which is why I don’t read something based entirely on ratings).
Anyway, I saw a few comments about Chapter 10 and decided to check it out. Geez Louise! Reading it was like a fever dream! It was like one of those dreams where you run away from something and go through a door to get away, only to be brought back to where you were originally/what you’re running away from. And no matter how many doors you pick and go through, you find yourself back in that same spot.
Yeah…..lmao. That’s what Chapter 10 was like. I ended up giving up after it brought me back to the beginning of the chapter (if you’ve read it, you know what I mean. If you haven’t read it, pleeease. It’s a doozy!).
I agree with a lotta you. The plot (plotwhatplot) was rushed but I meant.....for a short story like this? Fine. It is what it is. Besides, sometimes I do like quickies. Especially when they're fluffy and sexy like this one. I do have to say that this last chapter? Is the reason why there are times where I wish I could press a Play Button and watch the scene unfold ................*ahem*.............................Yep. As in I wanna watch them bang. ANYWAY. It was a nice reason. Not great. Not bad, either. Just nice.