
This could have been decent if only for a few changes:
1. Usually, i dont mind sex work but its like the author made with without any consideration of stds and stuff? The uke has sex with randos in alleyways? He gives blowjobs to randows in alleyways who c*m all over him and in him? And the seme just doesnt wrap it up. Crazy. It was so gross seeing c*m everywhere, especially after the uke got done with a rando. Like, i get it—the uke cant even afford food or a place to live, how can he afford condoms? But thats crazy.
2. The plot isnt plotting. Who punishes a sex worker with sex to "teach them a lesson"? In what universe does that make sense? Just say you wanted to fuck, but you didnt want anybody else to.

He didn't finish hs
He doesn't have parents
He was assaulted abused
He barely gets by there are times he has to go to the gangster dud just to get something to eat
He said he thinks that if he disappears or something he doesn't think anybody would come looking for him
If you're in that low of a low, doing shit safely doesn't even matter anymore. Take this as someone speaking from experience

Her options for ML really suck. So bad. I've yet to read a harem like this where all the options are terrible, there's usually one that stands out among the rest. Its more believable if one of the gods materializes as a human, gives up his divinity, and charms her. Seriously, I cant believe her luck.

Noah actually isnt bad at all and Im not understanding the hate? He's not manipulative of Esther, and they have a good relationship. I like Noah, and i like the romance (which is obviously common in genres like this but i still eat it up).

At this point, I think people are just tired of romance in the father/daughter webtoons, which is fine. But they're being weirdly agressive about their dislike of him, especially when he's not bad here or in the novel. Like you said, i dont get any red flags from him either b/c he doesnt have any. They're just projecting, honestly.
The art is gicing pixar, the story is just...redundant? At this point. And I feel like the rounder the art gets, the smoother everyone's brain gets.
helpp why is this so funny, I've been laughing at it for 5 minutes now
Lmaoo but it really does give Pixar