That is one hell of cliffhanger. Now how am I supposed to deal with my non-existent boner?
Just go to the raws : https://toonkor.chat/겨울-지나-벚꽃
I'm just enjoying the currently available story. I've read this story several times and there's this part which (to me) is the most painful yet beautiful and most relatable part:
http://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/given/mf/v01/c006/28/
http://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/given/mf/v01/c006/29/
http://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/given/mf/v01/c006/30/
Good job! The translation got better :) however, I think you're still struggling in deciding when to use "your" and "you're". I'm not a grammar nerd, but it does irritate and confuse me a bit lol so just fyi, "your" is used for explaining possession, such as your bag, your boyfriend, your lunch, etc. On the other hand, "you're" is the shortened version of "you are", which I assume you should've known how it is used. So good luck in translating the future updates! I'll be waiting for more XD
Reading this makes me wanna play toram again haha xD