
I don't think ercella is a bad person but she was a terrible mother. Imagine how vincente must feel if his mother who never worried about him started to get involved in his life. We can see that hes conflicted on how he feels about her. It good that she can admit she was wrong but i wish she could have talked to him first and actually say SORRY which she hasn't done and in my opinion is the most important part.

I dropped this story 20 chapters in and i saw that now its completed so i decided to read the extra chapters. The main thing that attracted me to this story was the poly relationship but based off the extras it seems like two ppl in love with one person. If the doctor isn't around it doesn't seem like the cat and dog interested in each other. I had hoped to see them also develope feelings in the later chapters but no. That seems to be a common occurrence with these types of relationships in stories but i wish more ppl would write a poly relationship with all members in love with each other. Obviously all relationships will be different but i don't like the jealously that comes from 2 ppl being in love w/ the same person and then boundaries aren't discussed. Then u got situations like in the extra where both the cat and the dog want to have sex w/ the doctor alone and then they get mad at each other. I mean If u write a poly relationship why can't you make them all in love? I've only found one story that sort of has that dynamic and it sucks bc there aren't many of these stories. ┗( T﹏T )┛

Younger brother was a pushy selfish asshole. I can't bring myself like after they get together bc everything leading up to that was shite. He raped the older brother! Then had the audacity to wonder why ue was being avoided. The art was great i loved that but it couldn't salvage this story. Older brother deserved better he really did. He was struggling with his identity in the family and had to struggle with the guilt and pressure. He felt like he didn't belong and then u have that douchebag harassing the older bro. Usually i can overlook it if the character can have growth and repent for what they did but this guy didnt regret it and he continued to be disgusting. The older brother falling 8n love with him didn't even feel natural.

Im a sucker for unrequited love so i had to read this story. I enjoyed it but i didnt love it. Mainly bc of rion. I just thought it was shitty of him to be aware of masaki's feeling for so long and never making a move while masaki has been suffering for literal years. Then to top it off he kinda forced himself onto masaki. It made my opinion of his character go down. I just dont understand what held him back for being with masaki. I dont hate him bc i dont think he's malicious but i didnt particularly like him either. I just want masaki to be happy.

"I just dont understand what held him back for being with masaki."
I agree. I don't think he's a bad guy and he obviously loves Masaki so I'm sure there's a reason. I think because we didn't really get much of Rion's POV that we were left in the dark. I wish the author would have elaborated on that part of his motivations and backstory more. One more chapter from Rion's POV would have perfected the story.

This was entertaining at first. I kinda liked the 1st couple terry was annoying at first but they were cute once the baby was born. 2nd couple was ok but rich guy was kind of annoying. I was not expecting the 3rd couple but i hated it. Sean just deserved better. I dont like jake or Kyle. It was so boring and overdramatic. Had me rolling my eyes every time they spoke. Overall it reaffirmed my dislike of pushy guys.
Ew no communication
ikr maybe if y'all started speaking all the stuff you're holding in the thought bubbles then you'd get somewhere