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From living under the same roof to then being classmates?! Ever since his parents passed away, Haebo...

Kang Chan and Seyeon have been close friends since they were young after being introduced by their p...

it was really cute but i got bored bc it kept diverting to the other couples. i’m the type of person who likes a story that focuses primarily on a main pairing and then in side stories it’ll have the side couples. would’ve liked it more if it kept focusing on the main pairing. like if ur gonna have only thirty chapters of content then those 30 chapters shouldn’t focus on more than two couples.

3/10. The backbone of this story is mostly the art. Tbh, I do like the details the author made for the mma setting, was really cool and interesting. I also love potato, my fav character in this story. I think i like all the characters except Kim Dan and Jaekyung, who are honestly both hard to like.

I love toxic romance, and honestly coming from someone who is mostly color blind to red flags, this was the story that I had to keep putting down out of frustration. I understand that the author tried to make this toxic romance as toxic as possible so that the redemption is as satisfying as possible. But tbh, Mingwa is not a good enough writer to pull that off.

Having fifty chapters of just Jaekyung screaming about how much he hates Kim Dan and then KD falling in love just made me want to gouge my eyes out. A lot of ppl say KD was stupid to fall in love, but in a way I do understand. KD is clearly not mentally well, what with being in constant debt and having his only supportive figure be in the hospital, it’s not hard to believe that he’d fall in love with the man that basically solved all his problems. This is also why I just don’t really buy how this is a romance. It’s clear that KD is just in love with him bc he’s his savior, and Jaekyung is just screaming at him like he’s the source of all his problems. I’m not blaming KD, but it is really a torturous read for me.

You can’t even say this is a toxic romance either, it really just felt like a “how much can we torture KD” story. I think the issue is that the author doesn’t really know how to make the reader stay aside from “I invested so much story already, might as well just see it through”. Jaekyung is hard to like aside from his looks, and KD is honestly just a boring mc whose only character trait is being depressed.

I just don’t this is a good story, and i’m honestly not reading it bc I think of this as a good romance, but more of I already committed 50 chapters.

this is the first ever story i’m giving a 10/10 to aside from orv. i’m literally crying i love this story so much. it gets better every arc even if every arc is already a masterpiece. i just finished this story and im already thinking about rereading it. i have never loved a bl mc and love interest as much is wang yi and qin. i was kinda skeptical after the first arc bc i was scared of not liking how it follows a different qin every time. but his personality is pretty constant and the fact that he slowly gets his memories back, or at least is aware of the past lives. either way, i love this story so much and recommend everybody who’s contemplating reading this TO READ IT. art is consistently good even after 147 chapters (current amt) and the plot is fluffy angsty and funny throughout. if u like transmigration and isekai ull very much love this story

this is the first ever story i’m giving a 10/10 to aside from orv. i’m literally crying i love this story so much. it gets better every arc even if every arc is already a masterpiece. i just finished this story and im already thinking about rereading it. i have never loved a bl mc and love interest as much is wang yi and qin. i was kinda skeptical after the first arc bc i was scared of not liking how it follows a different qin every time. but his personality is pretty constant and the fact that he slowly gets his memories back, or at least is aware of the past lives. either way, i love this story so much and recommend everybody who’s contemplating reading this TO READ IT. art is consistently good even after 147 chapters (current amt) and the plot is fluffy angsty and funny throughout. if u like transmigration and isekai ull very much love this story

short review: liked the story, didn’t like the offhanded omegaverse sexism and the second couple
long review:
ok so i actually really liked this story. wanna give it an 8/10. i will say i skipped all the chapters that had the second pairing (dojun and the doctor) as center focus. i also skipped all the side stories for that same reason and also bc i heard there was weird incest. the doctor is like the most useless character to this story and has weird thoughts and beliefs and is just generally a massive asshole to doyun and dojun. i actually hate him so much and think the story would’ve been better without him. i’ve never seen a doctor so weirdly invasive into their patient’s life and not end up having their license taken away and going to jail.

to be fair i also don’t like dojun either, but it’s mostly that he’s annoying and if the author redeemed him in the side stories then idk and don’t really care.

anyways. loved the story, loved the pairing and the art.

why i knocked it down two points is mostly bc i just don’t like the random weird sexism about alphas and omegas. tbh ig i kinda knew what i was getting into since most omegaverse stories are like this, but it’s still a point i wanna make here. the omegaverse setting handled here just made me feel like they lived in a society that was both modern but had weird 1800’s opinions. like why is it that when doyun’s about to get raped he realizes that he was safe because everyone else was taking care of him and not the bare minimum that alphas should be better? or how his mom tells him the only reason why he wasn’t attacked yet was bc he had a big strong alpha by his side, and not like, yknow, because these alphas should at least have basic decorum and not rape people??? why is it that the omegas in this story have to be the ones constantly told to have to take care of their pheromones or they’ll get attacked? idk it’s really giving “we always tell women to be careful but not that men should be better.”

omg the main couple is the only thing keeping this story together. i hate the rest of the cast holy shit. the doctor and the brother suck ass. i’m on chapter 55 and i just skip whenever those two r on screen. i also don’t like the weird victim blaming this story has. it’s like just recently ppl keep shaming doyun for releasing pheromones accidentally and that he’ll keep “attracting alphas” and that the only reason he hasn’t gotten hurt is because someone else keeps protecting him. okay umm then maybe tell the alphas to get their shit together and NOT rape an innocent person? i’m like actually going to just skip scenes where the side characters are there they actually piss me off

so uhhh mc is he still gonna act on his revenge orrr

imma pretend that the last like two chapters don’t exist like did mc really just say “I’m a man… If there was someone who didn’t have their guard up I get wanting to… yknow…” yeah i’m glad u didn’t finish ur sentence bc i actually would’ve went brain dead if he continued talking about how rape is understandable. also like the doctor keeping mc’s rapist in the same workplace like makes no sense?? like if ur as possessive and protective as u r it makes no sense that ud keep mc and the rape doctor in the same room together. idk like makes no sense to me （￣へ￣）

“I didn’t follow you, you came next to me.”Ian Gloucester, a paladin of the religi...

kinda shocked this story isn’t done yet . like it’s not bad or anything but like with the whole brother being part of a gang or stuff was so random and kinda unecessary dare i say it. idk now im like forgetting what this story is about and dont understand why the brother is even trying to break them up in the first place. personally think the story is cute but should’ve ended like.. 15 chaps ago

Personal rating: 9/10. i get the criticism about this being too slow but i really like the slowness of the story. it’s shounen ai, yes, but i feel like the romance is a side plot and it works for the story. i loveee idol stories (read Debut Or Die and I Became The Youngest Top Idol if you like this story yall!) and so im used to them just having bromance and no BL.

One thing this story does that most reincarnation stories (both the female and the male ones) don’t do is a focus on the person MC replaces. Usually, the person the mc replaces never thinks about what happened to them, but this one really cares about the person they replaced and wants to do them justice. I love that, and I think it’s bittersweet.


one complaint i do have is that i think this story has too many side plots? i mean, maybe the author is going to tie them all up together in some way later on but for now i do think the author is detracting a little from the main plot. either way, this is a bit of a nitpick.

i love all the characters, especially the main MC and the og guy he replaces. wish there could’ve been a way for them to interact, but alas, he is long gone. ;-;

“Because in order for me to have a brother, it has to be like this.” Minhyung, a psychopath who...

that guy is a certified lover boy certified pedophile

wanna read this but does it have bromance like debut or die? would love something similar(づ￣ ³￣)づ

So I thought I would give this a 6.5/10, but I thought harder and the more I was typing the ending review Inwas like fuck that this ending is so ass I’m making this a 5/10.

I just like realized that the main conflict of the story never actually got resolved. So these two little magical creatures are beefing and they get Chiwoo and Hwan to basically be their fighters, but even in the ending of the story they’re still beefing. A new magical boy is shown in the ending, which means… That the conflict was just thrown under the rug. The cycle of these creatures preying on desperate people wanting to make a wish for their lives to be better continues… And innocent casualties will continue to die or be traumatized again and again for the sake of this petty beef between these dumbasses… Great.

Anyways, ending is dog shit. This is the template I would use in a writing seminar on how NOT to write your endings. Chiwoo basically reverts everything. He basically causes a change in the timeline they live in, the main difference now is that he is able to save his parents, causing Hwan and Chiwoo to never being magical boys, and thus the main story events never existed. Chiwoo now also doesn’t know Hwan, and lived a completely different life. He is now happy. And of course they meet again and fall in love.

THIS FUCKING SUCKS. So basically you’re spitting on the love story you crafted, the entire plot of your story by putting them in a reimagined timeline. Why?? This is basically saying that if life gives you shitty circumstances, you can’t move on from them. Rather than your characters attempting to recover from their mistakes and move on from their trauma, they need divine intervention itself to come in and give them their happy ending. Basically, your characters don’t get to make their own happy ending, they have to be given it. It’s so unearned.

Your main protagonist doesn’t even know his own story. The last half of the season switches to Hwan’s pov, kept even in the final chapter. our protagonist doesn’t even get his own monologue, reflection, or literally anything in the last chapter. It’s literally his own story and the man is now a side character in the final season. I especially think this sucks because Chiwoo is a man who was depressed and dying in the inside from his lack of agency and stuck in his position of not being able to save everyone and thinking he is the cause of everyone suffering. If you were going to stick with this ending, fine. But I think it would’ve been more emotional if Chiwoo ends up remembering everything and sees how everybody in his life is happy, purely because of what he had done. But nope, we live in a dystopia of those events. Let’s be honest, Chiwoo is a diff person now, he has a support system, and plenty of friends. He doesn’t live with the insecurity of being an orphan, nor did he have to be groomed to completely relying on Hwan to be his rock. So for me, the Chiwoo that gets to have a happy ending is not the same Chiwoo that I grew attached to. If you really want to be technical about it, it feels like Chiwoo died for Hwan to be happy, and that just doesn’t sit right with me. It’s not simply that Chiwoo lost his memories. It’s not a Pearl Boy situation. It’s that Chiwoo lived a different life, and thus is a different person. You could’ve had the ending be that Hwan be transported to an alternate dimension and I would’ve had the same exact opinion. Bc that’s basically what this is.

To give a one sentence summary of this story: This is a porny, BL version of Madoka Magica. Even the ending was similar to Madoka, but like… badly written.

For those looking to read this: it’s not bad. I overall liked the story and if you like yanderes, you’ll like this. But I and most people don’t like the ending. It’s not the worst, but it’s definitely bad. It ends happily… But not the way you want it to.

Long ass review incoming(has spoilers, not including ending that’s a different review):
I REALLY liked the first half of the story. I’m someone who eats up yanderes so initially I was fine with the darker turn the story took. So I wanna start out with the positives. I love the art. The art is gorgeous and the characters are very expressive. The artist is very good at being able to express the tone with her art. I also really liked our MC Chiwoo. He’s utterly adorable and I actually really liked the way his trauma and sadness was written throughout the story. He’s a happy guy that likes somebody he feels like he shouldn’t, and then later on when his heart is shattered by that very man he loves his mental health goes downhill, and by the third season where he has nobody and nothing he’s almost completely different. His downward spiral was not badly written and I was able to sympathize a lot with him. I have a controversial take: I actually liked the initial direction Hwan (our ML)’s character was going. In the first season, you see everything purely from Chiwoo’s pov, so you think Hwan is a nice, kind guy who loves Chiwoo in a friendly way. This does get torn away tho, because of a non-con scene where he takes advantage of Chiron when he’s asleep. I thought it was interesting at first, seeing this guy we think is just chill and nice, but has a dark side hidden. The story also brushes it off, and Chiwoo never finds out, so it’s almost like the readers are put unease, b/c this guy is clearly not a good person, but he’s always super nice so is it just a one off thing? The 2nd season is where we find out tho, that this guy is a dark, possessive character who has actually never been who we thought he was. I loved this, and then I didn’t. Which leads me to my criticisms of the story.

I feel like the issue this story has is that it has three seasons, and every season has an incredibly different tone that Sagold (artist and author) guns for, which was really not a good idea. If she was a better writer, I think she could’ve pulled it off. But… she’s not, so it just feels like she has an idea in her head with what direction to take the story, but then every seasonal break decides she doesn’t like it and wants to take a different approach. The first season was filled with *interesting* sex scenes, so it was kinda fun even though they’re pretty non-consent. Each villain’s character design is actually peak, and honestly every villain was dare I say hotter than the ML himself. You can tell Sagold had fun crafting their designs. The second season you get to know more about Hwan(the ML), and the darker feelings he has for Chiwoo(our cutie mc). The third season is just kinda… Bad. It felt like the author didn’t know how to end it bc she wanted our leads to get back together, but realized she didn’t know how to write it. This ties back to my criticism of Hwan and Sagold. Sagold writes Hwan’s unforgivable actions, but then realizes now in the third season that by this point there’s no easy way of making Chiwoo come back to him within the length of 17 chapters she outlines her final season to have. She tries to make him more sympathetic, but her own writing bites her in the ass b/c season 2 focuses a lot on Chiwoo’s friendship with the 2nd ML and how much he cares for him. So now in season 3 she tries to de-emphasize Hwan’s bad actions and more focus on how his life sucks without Chiwoo in an attempt to make the readers like him again. The issue with writing a redemption arc is that you have to be good at it. Sagold is not. Your characters can be evil, but you cant easily turn them from horrible, killing-your-best-friend-evil, to i’m-so-horrible-for-you-leave-me-alone-edgy emo kid Hwan is in the last five chapters of the story. Imo, she should’ve just stuck to her guns and just made Hwan stay as he was in season 2, and if she really wanted to keep Chiwoo and Hwan together perhaps made Chiwoo more depressed and in turn more willing to stay with Hwan, who knows all of Chiwoo’s secrets and so is the only person who truly knows Chiwoo. Chiwoo is lonely and lost, so making him feel tethered to Hwan, and rationalizes to himself why Hwan would kill 2nd ML.

Writing a review of the ending as a diff post because this is too long lmao.

Would love any Yaois with seme/top to be possessive and/or yandere. Nothing TOO extreme tho. Thx queens