okay so i just read this story completely. it’s pretty good. i LOVE the MC. i’m mostly put off by the weird child-like characteristics of the ml. while i don’t find MC a creep for getting together with ml at all, because he probably just finds him immature. it’s just as a reader knowing that ml didn’t age past like 9 kinda makes the whole thing uncomfortable? it would’ve been a more interesting story if they were more like best friends or smth like that. i still think the story is well-written given the constraints of being a short story, but the sexual aspects of it does diminish the reading experience
yeahhh i might drop the story. idk its just not like… hooking me anymore. idk how to describe how im feeling, but i feel as if the author is trying to deliver a really deep story, but it doesn’t work out the way it was intended because of the amt of smut there is. you can have smut in your story and still make it well written ofc, case in point Payback, but i think the author just isn’t balancing what she wants the story to have. ofc im seeing people really like this story so obv its subjective. i also just dont really like MC so there’s that too
i don’t even like the characters i’m just living for the drama tbh
is it just me or does the official translation read weird?
bruv he really needs that snickers like calm down
Leo Lombardi’s a hotshot L1 racecar driver for Team Zeus. He’s young, good-looking and h...
- Author: Pyogo
- Genres: Drama / Romance / Yaoi / Webtoons / Sports
idk, i really like this story but it bothers me how weird the seme is about omegas. like “oh all omegas are the same” or “stay with me an omega can pop out at any moment” says shit like this every damn chapter. it feels weirdly objectifying and just generalizing all omegas. feels like underlying sexism. it’s just a nitpick bc i do like the story and characters but yeah
i loved the ending. but what’s the spin off abt? does anyone who read the novel know about it?
"Byul, a popular alpha and a first-year high school student, once trained to be an idol but has...
- Author: Fargo
- Genres: Webtoons / Shounen Ai / Romance
ugh the way mc blushes is the cutest thing ever, i just wanna gobble him up and cuddle with him and make him preg-
haven’t even read this story and the comments are the funniest i’ve ever seen like damn the mc must be dumb af
yeahhh agreed with what people r saying. maybe its different in the novel but the rape in this story was unnecessary now that we’re nearing the end. it seems to serve no purpose really, since yugeon is attached to all the espers which makes him look delusional and stockholmed than a caring person that the story is trying to tell us he is. Which isn’t to say that he isn’t a caring guy, but it’s just like overlooking all the rape and disgusting shit he’s been thru.
u expect me to feel bad for any of the espers in this story? ymake me forget about all the times they violated Yugeon and now the story is pretending it never happened.
i love this story and will read it to the end, but im trying really hard to forget what it put mc thru. and now it feels like it didn’t play any purpose