beta
I really prefer the old version They just made it rapey and long asf. In it's original 5 chapters, the pacing was very good with a better story motive. I don't see the point in stretching this out to focus more on the mafia or wtv industry this takes place in when the author could just focus more on the seme's backstory (like in the original story, he's hired to assassinate that family but didn't kill off the kid out of pity or wtv) and his relationship to the uke, just following the end of the original plot. They really had to make him ruthless compared to the old one ugh.