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I had read the first 3 chapters of the novel before but for some reason I just found it so hard to read. I am not sure why. Is it the style of the writing/translation? Maybe it's just polished MTL. I can't put a finger to it. I found the translation flow very unnaturally. Can someone give me their own take on this please? I really want to read it but I am too picky about the writing. If it's translated correctly and just a style that I need to get used to then I am very much willing to try it again.