Guys the whole story is about his abandonment and attachment issues Like if you took that away from him, it's a story about nothing. God forbid we have interesting characters.
That’s actually a really good point and I didn’t even think about that now I’m just sad that’s all the plot is…
I don't think it's a bad thing, because it's not like it's shallow. It really explores his perspective, how he became that way and how it impacts others in his life. It makes the characters feel more like people.
My point is that if a reader just wants to see two hot dudes kiss with no issues whatsoever, then go read thaaaat. His issues aren't a fault, they're a feature!
Ohhhhh I seeee yeah I agree! I’m just sad that’s we don’t get a lot of the mc’s backstory, he seems a bit flat of just being happy and chill. But maybe I’m interpreting it wrong.
There is nothing interesting about him.
Nah man, dropping this. It could be fucking Dante's comedy from chapter 3, but I'm not staying past "Are you in love with your brother?" THERE ARE OTHER REASONS WHY HE'D BE AGAINST IT DUDE.
Beautiful story, but now that it's over all I'm thinking about is how Adam's mom systematically slept with his half brothers (and maybe even him???), that shit's fucked up, I'm sorry Adam o7
Lol, well that explains it. Imagine you're the most insecure man alive and you're in love with royalty, who you basically serve. Imagine that the royalty prefers the most hated slave in the kingdom over you. Imagine that they fall in love. Imagine that even in his most powerless, humiliated and confused state, he still prefers his old love over you. What a loser.
I understand it's supposed to be a cute scene, but... Idk I just find it weird when characters in a romance story are jealous of children. Like oooooh watch out, this eight year old is coming to steal your bf.
Normally I would agree, but I personally let it slide in this case. More cause I'm willing to interpret it as jealous that the kid has had much more time to be around the mc, and aresh wants to spend time with Seiichirou lol. But yeah, I doubt seiichirou is a peophile so it still feels silly ngl lol
Yeah I think he's more jealous that mc was doting on someone else, and doesn't really know how to express that he also wanted to be doted on and talked to like that. Moral: men are weird
Girls start dating two chapters ago and are already in the "Wow, I love your hands <33 ((such long fingers))" "I can show them to you any time<333 ((and what I can do with them))" phase. Crazy. The wedding is gonna happen in ten chapters.
Girl, they didn't say all that in under five seconds
LMAOO
Yeeeessss, every good smut artist know it's not the dicks and butts that make a sex scene, but the crazy expressions and sudden breaking of pace. It works every damn time when artists do that "his eyes go black and tiny and be starts ranting possessively in his head"
They're just chilling, man. Just vibing. None of that political trickery or monster hunting or traumatic family coming to hunt them. Not even interpersonal drama. They love each other and just enjoy having a grand old time. I love that for them.
Well I guess that's one way to write the climax of your wholesome cute high school romance: Main character tries to fucking hang himself on school grounds????? I'm not even mad, when I read it I just burst out laughing lmao
I thought I was the only one I felt bad laughing at him like huh dude? yeah i get him tho, if I'm gonna do it, at least I'll do some testing HAHAHAHAH