Now I am not a sex pro, but I am pretty sure you can't just shove it in. That would hurt as shit!! Like literally a big ass shit. People are really writing wlm romances, where the girl bleeds because she's a virgin (inaccurate), but then they go on to do this and think it's just going to stretch out like a balloon?? And no foreplay?? Not even a kissy on the back of the neck to make your partner feel nice??
And considering thats an anal(and raw..ugh..) without preparation, not even bleeding your asshole you just straight up get hemmoroid lmao
Still bleeding badly and you cant sit up straight...although, its a fantasy afterall. There is no such thing as logic when the author are the one who decide what they wanna write/draw or so so (￣∇￣")
There isn't any kind of drama, it's just two dudes in love, being horny all the time..and that's okay! I really liked that! Of course if all stories were like that it'd be rather boring, but this was a nice break.( ˶ ❛ ꁞ ❛ ˶ )
...Now about the last chapter,
I don't think she has romantic feelings for her brother, but it's too weird to chalk it up to young girl discovering her sexuality. I wouldn't even call it possessiveness, since it's not like she wants to do the deed with her brother. I genuinely don't know what the author was going for. The only explanation that makes sense to me is that the sister IS in fact sexually attracted to her brother and just so happens to be a cuckold at the same time, but maybe some things should not be deeply thought about..
I really like how the seme was handled, since the whole "I'm straight, but i fell for you!" thing is getting tiresome. He was clearly stated to be bi, the uke had some biphobia that's rather common and in the end it wasn't treated as a bad thing. I like how there are drag queens, they are funny, but not ridiculed. The fact that he went out of his way to read a book, to know what was troubling his partner was very sweet.
I feel like if you're going to write yaoi or yuri, you should treat the characters as actual gay individuals, instead of "uwu cute guy with another guy". The reason why so many women enjoy yaoi is because there aren't oversexualized women, so when reading yaoi manga you should awknowledge that it's often oversexualized version of gay men. Nothing harmful in enjoying yaoi manga, even the trashy cheesey type, if you make sure not to project those expectations onto real people.
Anyway, sorry for this dumb rant, the manga is great, definitely recommend checking it out ( ◜‿◝ )♡
not a dumb rant, really enjoyed reading this actu! your thoughts were very interesting
Very well said!
intellectual
Not a dumb rant at all! You've said a lot of the things I have to say for this book but was too lazy to write
Accidentally clicked post before I even finished writing the comment but anyways, you're an intellectual (๑•ㅂ•)و✧
I love the pairing, but for the love of god, leave the poor man alone. He isn't some rich boy, he studied properly and worked hard just as the rest of them.
It's not like his father helped him get interested in the craft, he just collapsed one day and went "Well either you leave your work and do my work where everyone hates your guts or your a POS and I'm writing you out of my will uwu" and we're all supposed to sit there thinking that they're being reasonable.
When that MF went "It's not that you didn't know, it's that you didn't care >:(" It's a job you dumbass, if you have a problem say it. This isn't highschool should manga, one won't figure out your thoughts from the way your eyes glitter jfc
I agreee especially the last bit. If anyone from my real life work pull something like the lil brother did regarding work, i will have to report him to someone for being "hard to communicate and coordinate with" that's not how you did a job.
When you dont acc something in a job you need to point out why, so that the revision can be made to accommodate you, you dont make it a guess game and waste everyone's time
I wanna go out that way too, but I'm gun control. Do you think someone could stab you with a nice rapier while fucking??