
I REALLY REALLY loved everything about this and the art! God! I kind of wish director kim would have gotten away with the murder because if the story was from their point of view it's also understandable why they did what they did. Well not really because no one was really holding Charlie captive, he did it to himself but i dont know. Director kim thought he was helping hut it was actually useless considering how weak minded charlie is.

I could think of so many other plots that could have kept this story going. For example, people trying to get El out the castle but he keeps it from Ryan, Ryan bein controlling and maybe harming El would even be.a better plot, BUT FOR THE KING TO LEAVE HIS DUTIES TO CHASE SOMEONE WHO LEFT FOR A DUMB REASON, this- this ain’t it chief. This story was great at the beginning then slowly went downhill. The creativity became cliche. And then when Ryan finds El he doesn’t talk, he fucks him, like alright ig.

But since the very beginning it's always been more about desire than actual reason. The Prince has always done things the way he feels like it and honestly the one closer to the throne is currently still at the kingdom so it's not like he's left much behind. I find it weird that you'd expect them to talk anything out at first stance, both have always been of the impulsive sort. It's how they've gotten into problems before and how they've fixed said problems too.You using this as an argument to dislike the current chapters is weird, because it's always been like this. Now if you were to say that they haven't truly evolved as characters then that would be more understanding and kind of true js. ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

I mean yeah, sure, it was alright at first. I liked that they couldn’t communicate and that it caused more drama but all we really have seen between them is lust and sex. No real character development. Thats what im trying to say. There could have been different plots to build development and let us see why it would hurt each other so much to leave but now it doesnt make much sense. Ryan just has an obsession with El and apparently El remembers Ryan from the past which still doesnt give much on how he could love Ryan. Him running away is an okay plot but its so cliche for a story like this with a creative beginning. I really thought since the story was going on for a while that Ryan would at least ask questions but he didn’t. I will spend years looking for the development but its no where to be found. Its the same from when they first met.

That was one of the most daddy like things I’ve read in my life.

I have been wanting that for so long. For Yohan to just have his way with Soohwa, or like Soohwa to suggest shit he thinks Yohan might be into. Like light bondage. I have been making Collages and fanfic where soohwa wear womans white panties, thigh highs, triangle lace bra and a bunny butt plug and ears, no pants. And Yohan wearing black pants, cuffs, bow tie, black bunny hear and a bunny tail tied to the belt loop of the pants, no shirt and them just going at it like rabbits. Or Yohan bringing home red rope cuz it was buy one item get a surprise gift free at the adult toy store and Yohan got some shit and now soohwa thinks that that's Yohans fetish and then tries to play at it.
Or maybe Soohwa suddenly wants Yohan to call him names in bed, Like whore, slut, cum bucket, princess, and for soohwa to call him Daddy, teacher, etc.
OR FOR YOHAN TO GET A MIRROR AND PUT IT IN FRONT OF THE BED SO THAT THEY CAN FINALLY DO IT DOGGY STYLE.
OR SOOHWA SUCKING YOHANS DICK MORE OFTEN CUZ I LOVE SEEING HIM DO THAT IT'S SO CUTE, I WANT HIM TO CHOKE ON IT.
ORRRRRRRRRRRRR YOHAN PUNISGES SOOHWA FOR BEING A BAD BOY. SO HE TIES UP SOOHWA, ( MAYBEEEE TIES UP HIS DIcK PREVENTING HIM FROM CUMMING), AND SHOVES A VIBRATOR IN HIS ASS ON MAX AND THEN YOHAN GOES TO WORK EARLY IN THE MORNING AND COMMES BACK AT 11 pm (night) TO FIND A MESSY CUM COVERED TIRED SOOHWA, WHO HAS ORGASMED ALL DAY. AND HE'S HUNGRY BUT YOHAN ONLY FEED HIM HIS DICK AND SOOHWA IS SO HUNGRY HE JUST SUCKS THE CUM OUT OF YOHAN LIKE 3 TIMES. BUT HE ALSO GET HORNY AND THEN THEY FUCK, YOHAN PLAYING WITH AND SUCKING ON SOOHWA'S PINK LITTLE NIPPLES, BUT NOTHING COMES OUT OF SOOHWA CUZ HE'S EMPTY SO HE HAS A DRY ORGASM BUT YOHAN FILLS UP SOOHWA'S WANTON LITTLE ASSHOLE ALL THE WAY. And then they eat yummy food and go to sleep. I wrote a whole ass essay.
I ruin everything good and pure in life.

LMAOOOO i legit just like let it all go into a comment and if u look far back enough you'll find more from me and it's stupid funny. Like I can write a five page fanfic in 20 minutes, God forbid i have to write a school essay tho. Lol. And yes a lot of naughts that imma try to right. And yes very extreme, I want to send this to ker. Maybe she'll commend my nastiness
that was crazy