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Can I really say something?
Not trying to offend anyone here
But it honestly seems so fast paced
And there's many plot holes
Even the start is little confusing
But honestly it's such a different type of story that makes it so unique and fun
And that art style
But in my personal opinion
If the story slowed down a little
It would make it more fun
Anyway the main idea of this story is just like so good
Honestly I'm just happy there isn't any rape and toxicity in it
I hope Both live happily and enjoy without any toxic drama


Imma talk a little about the novel here so those who don't want spoiler please don't read below this
Tho it's just a little spoiler but still I'm warning


I've read the extras of this novel
Where they both have the children
From that alone I know this novel is good
Doesn't really have the toxic drama
Tho seme probably have separation anxiety and is really cautious about puppy
But both are such a good couple