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It’s great, more mature than most of those types of stories, not too cringy or overly cheep with coincidence, but I think that the way Hestia act is just like a fan would with idol. I mean don’t get me wrong I like the main couple but it’s just hard to read when she gets all flustered about her “favorite”. Those types of stories where main character is basically is in love with some character from the novel is hard to read, she act like a little fan girl all the time, she even act more normal with the crown prince! It’s not a hate, I really like hestia, she’s such a badass and all but it’s just a bit annoying for me at least to read their conversation because she’s mostly seeing him through the glasses of “my favorite, poor second male lead”.