
too short. i need to see them fucking in every position imaginable (not something i say often). like im so serious. i thought they would fuck for 3 chapters AT LEAST. let me see them doggy style, luke riding andrew, sixty nine, andrew eating luke out AGAIN, luke taking control and overstimulating andrew until he begs. i wanna see anything and everything please im begging.

the premise is really good and interesting but the side characters i could not give a fuck about ??? like i’m sorry but we have been introduced to like 20 different characters and none of them have been flushed out enough for me to care…. they could die and meh. also kinda feel the same about the mc so far, he’s very bland
thank you for the food