The plot is all over the place. It’s as if the author only likes impact frames instead of build ups. Every single scene feels like a jump and I genuinely believed I skipped a chapter because of how abrupt the changes are. The MC and the ML getting together was so sudden, the ML becoming obsessed with the MC was sudden, the CCTV scene was also sudden.
Yep I agree with you. When it started it felt like a slow pace story that would give uso more but then it was like BAM sex scene BAM they get together and the plot is gone.
The plot is all over the place. It’s as if the author only likes impact frames instead of build ups. Every single scene feels like a jump and I genuinely believed I skipped a chapter because of how abrupt the changes are. The MC and the ML getting together was so sudden, the ML becoming obsessed with the MC was sudden, the CCTV scene was also sudden.
Yep I agree with you. When it started it felt like a slow pace story that would give uso more but then it was like BAM sex scene BAM they get together and the plot is gone.