Like I get angst and dark bls, like you do you babe
But this is just kinda ass in my opinion, black hair is pathetic and blondes annoying.
Reading this just kinda leaves me with the feeling of... "What??" and disappointment.
The plot is also quite confusing lol
Dude I literally went "WHAAAAAAAAAAAAT" when he said "lets make a baby"
Moment to appreciate how respectful Blondie is tho, how he said he'll give up if he isn't gay, nice to see
Feel author has a little bit of same face syndrome going on here, when I saw uriels friend I was like "huh??? Uriel but with melanin???" Lol
Story seems nice so far, but I kind agent a eerie feeling from it. Like whats with the nightmares?
This authors propably the best yaoi dick drawer there is, good shit also DAMNNNNN
This manwha is SHIT
I can say that confidently even ignoring the propblamtic shit
This manwha is shit becuase of the story and writting, the characters are as deep as a paper plate and as likeable as the shit smear on a toilet stall door.
Dan has no fucking back bone which makes him unlikable, the top, forget his name even, is literally an asshole with no reademing qualities (his dicks too big even)
And I am going to laugh my ass off if the author makes it so the top has "sad past.,.,." which has made him this way. Because the top has showed no signs of that at all. Here's a comparison: In BJ Alex the top did show some signs as to why he was an ass, though still not really fitting excuses, it added depth and a layer of realism.
Yeah the top here is like a fucking wood plank that just hammers poor Dan here.
but I am honestly curious how the author will continue this story, cus I legit cannot think of anything that can save it, besides Dan learning to stand up for himself and find happiness, while the top fucking idk gets pummeled and retires from boxing and learns through loss how much of a shit person he is.
Will say, the art is fantastic, perhaps the author should just focus on their art instead of writing.
I write this comment in frustration, becuase I feel this could have been good, by the initial premise and art.
Tdlr: the arts good, the writing is shit, the characters are like two slices of plain ass white bread that make a shit sandwich. I fear it will always be shit, but it could've been good.
Also for the people who like jinx, you do you babe, but I recommend finding better written bl.
And to very toxic haters, babe it's two fucking 2d plain bread ass men fucking eachother, stop caring this much
This manwha is SHIT
I can say that confidently even ignoring the propblamtic shit
This manwha is shit becuase of the story and writting, the characters are as deep as a paper plate and as likeable as the shit smear on a toilet stall door.
Dan has no fucking back bone which makes him unlikable, the top, forget his name even, is literally an asshole with no reademing qualities (his dicks too big even)
And I am going to laugh my ass off if the author makes it so the top has "sad past.,.,." which has made him this way. Because the top has showed no signs of that at all. Here's a comparison: In BJ Alex the top did show some signs as to why he was an ass, though still not really fitting excuses, it added depth and a layer of realism.
Yeah the top here is like a fucking wood plank that just hammers poor Dan here.
but I am honestly curious how the author will continue this story, cus I legit cannot think of anything that can save it, besides Dan learning to stand up for himself and find happiness, while the top fucking idk gets pummeled and retires from boxing and learns through loss how much of a shit person he is.
Will say, the art is fantastic, perhaps the author should just focus on their art instead of writing.
I write this comment in frustration, becuase I feel this could have been good, by the initial premise and art.
Tdlr: the arts good, the writing is shit, the characters are like two slices of plain ass white bread that make a shit sandwich. I fear it will always be shit, but it could've been good.
Also for the people who like jinx, you do you babe, but I recommend finding better written bl.
And to very toxic haters, babe it's two fucking 2d plain bread ass men fucking eachother, stop caring this much
The art amazing, the characters are cute, though the writing is hmmm could be better..
It's feels rushed and the relationship between feels a bit.. idk how to describe but takaras feeling switch was a bit sudden idk
If this longer I think it would be better
Still a cute read
On chapter 3 but had to make a comment cus what?? What is this start???
Like it's terrible but I'm laughing lmao
Love the jinx comment section, mix of people shitting on the manwha, people defending it, people making posts to be aware of an identity stealer or some shit, and that one girl that's batshit insane stalking people for hating on this manwha cus she's got no life
Anyway, this manwha mid, art style is good, but stories bland, top written as a prick with no redeeming qualities, and bottoms plain as bread with no back bone.
Bad writing, good art, batshit fanbase
Dude what is this shit, I saw some posts about snippets so thought it be a fine
This is just kidnap + rape shit?? With an art style that makes the top/rapist look like a fucking Baki character
Anyway haven't felt this uncomfortable and upset at a manwha in a while, if I could give a negative rating I would.
The bottom (really more like victim) never shows that he likes the top at all and does not like or consent to the sex at all, that much is very clear. And no him getting hard, which the top likes to point out, does not mean he's enjoying it or consenting.
Also him saying they've been going at it for a month straight??? The amount of marks on him???
When he ran away he felt nothing towards the top and cared for his safety, and top straight up knocked him out and brought him back.
Very disturbing and disgusting stuff.
This is essentially, a homeless abused young guy, (which btw his age isn't shared in the manwha but him running in 10th grade being mentioned, he very well could be a minor which is even more fucked) getting kidnapped while he's looking for food and somewhere to stay out of the cold. He is held hostage and raped every single day. Then the rapist murders someone and scares him shitless so he runs away, causing the other guy to knock him out, being him back, and rape him while he's knocked out until he wakes up. And then his rapist has him promise to always stay with him???
Also the top is UGLY AS FUCKKK, like I know you horny fujoshis will look the other no matter how disgusting shit is but really???
Had to skip past these latest chapters cus it just me cringe
1. So much sticky surgery stuff
2. Bro you roll bake shit there that is a health code violation I swear
3. It just kinda looks gross with everything on them
Yeah idk this BL's kinda doodoo
The main couple didn't have like any chemistry before and it felt kinda forced, still does
I sticker around because the luck thing was a cool concept, how they can like balance eachother out
But it seems the author has completely forgotten about and the manwha is just porn with terrible plot now
Bummer
