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This manwha is SHIT
I can say that confidently even ignoring the propblamtic shit
This manwha is shit becuase of the story and writting, the characters are as deep as a paper plate and as likeable as the shit smear on a toilet stall door.
Dan has no fucking back bone which makes him unlikable, the top, forget his name even, is literally an asshole with no reademing qualities (his dicks too big even)
And I am going to laugh my ass off if the author makes it so the top has "sad past.,.,." which has made him this way. Because the top has showed no signs of that at all. Here's a comparison: In BJ Alex the top did show some signs as to why he was an ass, though still not really fitting excuses, it added depth and a layer of realism.
Yeah the top here is like a fucking wood plank that just hammers poor Dan here.
but I am honestly curious how the author will continue this story, cus I legit cannot think of anything that can save it, besides Dan learning to stand up for himself and find happiness, while the top fucking idk gets pummeled and retires from boxing and learns through loss how much of a shit person he is.
Will say, the art is fantastic, perhaps the author should just focus on their art instead of writing.
I write this comment in frustration, becuase I feel this could have been good, by the initial premise and art.
Tdlr: the arts good, the writing is shit, the characters are like two slices of plain ass white bread that make a shit sandwich. I fear it will always be shit, but it could've been good.
Also for the people who like jinx, you do you babe, but I recommend finding better written bl.
And to very toxic haters, babe it's two fucking 2d plain bread ass men fucking eachother, stop caring this much