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This shit is terrible
Horrible pacing, bad writting of both bottom and top, they do not have cohesive personalities at all
Me ranting about this shit, from chapter 3 to 9
After the random dick grabbing in bed, which is already handled strangely but whatever, they go outside.
Why are they outside? Arent they supposed to be scheming or some shit to steal the crystal? Are they shopping? What? Ok whatever
Then the classic 'saving from getting hit by a moving vehicle' thing happens "you saved me!1!2 but yoi got hurt for me, what should i do!1!1!"
Already this seems to be just shoved into the storyline, very random, and now they fucking teleport back to the place the guys staying? And tells him to wear a random dress for the reason of "its funny hehe"????? Then he wears and the do the masterbation thing which at this point im just sitting and saying "what the fuck"
What made me really drop this is after the meeting between top and purple hair guy, scheming and being like "hehe ill use" ok for fucking what??? And the shitty "o-oh im catching fweelings.,.,." Is just godddd
But the fucking "i dont do casaul relationships" after top tries to cozy up to him??? WHAT THE FUCK WAS THE THING WITH HIM TOUCHING YOUR DICK THEN??? HIM SHOVING A DILDO UP YOUR ASS??? YOU DIDNT MAKE A BIG DEAL ABOUT THAT????
Please dont read this shit for your sanity
Dropped at chapter 9