Potterbun's Favorite

My man's logic : Sleep wildly and passionately with wife = Naaaaah
Also my man : Divorce wife then become a hooker to distroy wife coochie = Yeaaaah

I really like how the author gave an effort to lay out the setting and not just a half-assed one page explanation of how the world is an omegaverse one to exploit the heat/rut thing going on so that the story can unfold. This is actually great, FL has a personality and you could tell she had a past but won’t fully reveal it now for the pacing... speaking of which, is very nice. Mostly in eromangas like this, they don’t give a shit about pacing but this one, it kinda gives a hint of being well written one. But who knows, it’s only been a chapter. Nevertheless, i’m looking forward for the updates and further development. I hope it won’t turn into some third rate eromanga and keep up the good work
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There's an interesting dynamic going on with all the main characters knowing the contents of the novel, ergo the future. But idk, it missed the mark by not involving more mind games and twists.
The fl's stupidity is refreshing, when it's not being used as a way to waste everybody's time that is, but it hinders the potential the story could've had.
The author is a bit too focused on everyone's relationships, and although the main characters are nice and stand out from the normal shoujo tropes, they still kinda fail to feel deep (even after Izana and his backstory).. so in the end the story suffers under all of this and it feels like the slap standard shoujo webtoon.

Thats a great idea putting a spy camera on his sunglasses but I'm worried that his friend might not call for the second time ╥﹏╥