Can i hate Shu for even a second? Because in the end, even if he's in the embrace of Ziyu, his last words were still of Jiang? That even if he said that he'll be there for Ziyu after he dies, he never said I Love You back to Ziyu?
Even though I knew that Ziyu had long since accepted what's left of Shu's affection, that only a friendship was given to him, can I have the right to be angry with Shu? Even though it's not his fault that he can't love Ziyu wholeheartedly? I'M SO ANGRY I'M CRYING
GAHD I CRIED BUCKETS
I'm still rooting for Mc x Sungtae HAHAHAHAHA the bully's hot with that fucked out face ngl
I agree with most of the comments saying this story's kinda flat tho I appreciate the author's effort for this. Tho unlike KS the story didn't connect with me and I felt like I was just scrolling and was just waiting for the story to end (I'm sorry authornim) compared with KS, this one's just vanilla
It's kinda funny yet understandably reasonable that it took that long for Hyesung to admit his affection with Dojin. Reasonable with the fact that they started nonconsensually. Yes, it looked like Hyesung was annoyingly in denial that he wanted it but, it was 'instinct over reason'. In addition, how he acted so annoying, just immature, and vexingly obnoxious is understandable in a way that 1. he's a runaway, 2. left by his mom, 3. abused by his father, 4. Ignored by grandmother- all in all, he had no guidance towards maturity. Some might say maturity is self-taught but, it also depends on how someone is brought up, tho this is just a fic but, it's also how Hyesung was made into character. AND mind you, he's undeniably silly , he acts on impulse, and has no common sense. Yeah, it's irritating how obvious it was that he was being scammed, but that just showed how poor parenting would lead to and also lack of education. Ah, yes, he's a sucker for money but for a runaway, I think being shamelessly practical is understandable. It's for survival. Least he's being honest with his needs and desires rather than acting all shy and pretentious.
That's all, just wanna share my thoughts tho they're completely disorganized hehehehe
The 2nd story's hawt too...