Chap. 5 was a bit out of place put it some were else
This was a beautiful and amazing story I wish there were more to it
Dam so annoyed just gonna wait for 3 or 4 updates next time
YAY next time
Don't touch my ,he would say?
Oooooo shit dude I got a baaad feeling watch your a$$
yup I feel the same
me too.... AAAAGH !!! I NEED UPDATE ASAP Σ(っ°Д °;)っ
There is never enough sex I just wish there was more smutty a$$
Yes ba- na-nas !!!! Amazing
WTF noooo!!!!!! gotta have the rest plz plz don't kill him off it's gotta end happy
At first I thought your comment was "OH Hell noooo!!!!!!"
That's what I was thinking yes I don't want him to be killed off
I just couldn't read any more after they made love
Chap. 5 was a bit out of place put it some were else