potterhead September 4, 2024 2:51 am

I'm not a big fan of stories where the original lead becomes the villain and tries to monopolize everyone. I think it's a lot more interesting when the "villaines" finds a way to get along with the original lead and helps her go beyond her role as a girl everyone loves. Like the guys are a-holes, it would be better if the girls became friends and worked together towards their own happy endings.

    D_ck.simp September 4, 2024 3:03 am

    What? But that woman is always been like that, there is no timeline where she acted like a proper FL. That's why alot of souls perished because of her, she took all those souls to become edith and pushed them all tp her trap, and she was doing it just for her world to kept going.

    potterhead September 4, 2024 12:29 pm

    Oh yeah I understand that regarding this particular webtoon. But I was talking about webtoons in general that do this.
    There a lot of webtoon plots where the mc reincarnates as the villainess and changes the story and the original lead becomes the bad guy and I just think it's a little unnecessary and boring.
    But hey, that's just my opinion.

    D_ck.simp September 5, 2024 8:01 am

    Well you got a point there. Sometimes i also finds it boring.

potterhead September 4, 2024 12:03 am

All the guys in these stories were assholes tbh...
The short guy annoyed me the most, she shouldn't have gotten back together with him

potterhead September 2, 2024 3:49 pm

I think the intention behind this story is good but, in my opinion, the author didn't go about it in the best way. For starters the author makes it seems like, in the beginning, that only people with a certain "taste" would be into fat girls and that no one could just like them for who they are.
The way their relationship starts is a bit strange. He says he only likes chubby girls because one fell on top of him once and it felt good...? That's totally fetishism; it's the same as the people who like manga and anime say they only like japanese or asian people. Even though, through out the story, we are shown that he likes her beyond her chubbiness, chubbiness seems to always be the main attraction point. There is also a moment when she feels insecure about his feelings for her, wondering if they would be together if she wasn't fat and instead of saying "yes, because I love you no matter what you look like" or something he just asks her if she's going to lose weight in the future, she says no, problem solved; implying that if she actually did think of losing weight maybe they couldn't be together then. Even when showing that he likes her personality it always revolves around her being fat, one way or another.
On the other hand, Hiyami didn't have any of that. He may be a bit rough and straight forward, but he was never really mean to her. He cared for her and even after realising his feelings for her he only cared about her happiness. His reasons for liking her had nothing to do with her physical appearance. He simply fell for her.
When Tagami asks her if Hiyama's feelings would give her more confidence than his own I think it only makes sense that they would. From the beginning Tagami mostly focused on her body, while Hiyami never cared about her body and only saw her for who she is.
So I think the author chose the wrong character to be the main lead. I think Hiyami's feelings have bigger body positivity message than Tagami's. Hiyami shows you that love goes beyond appearance.

potterhead August 24, 2024 4:58 pm

I hated that they cheated on all of the stories except one, the story I liked the least. The first three one shots could've been really good if only they hadn't cheated, but I suppose it was asserted in the first chapter that guys suck so... checks out

potterhead August 23, 2024 12:42 am

Really adorable!! I love how they supported each other's dreams and rooted for one another. Obviously it wouldn't be a shoujo without the lil' old misunderstanding ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

potterhead August 22, 2024 2:03 pm

I didn't like the second story. He bullies her for 13 years and then throws a tantrum when she acts scared of him. Like what did you expect my guy? And it doesn't make sense that suddenly she loles him. That Stockholm syndrome

potterhead August 16, 2024 12:46 pm

Ummm... i guess the story was cute, but I don't think those girls were completely wrong tbh. If you agree to date someone you can't always just talk about the things you like, one has to show interest in the other person's interests as well.

potterhead August 13, 2024 11:11 pm

Uuuuugh... I read this when I was kid and I had really liked it, but rereading it now... it's not a very good story... both guys treat her badly because of some girl... ouji was just using her to make himself feel better and hiro was just giving mixed signasl and then blowimg her off because of his "friends girlfriend" who was also supposedly his girlfriend that he was taking care of until they got back together... wtf
The girl should've just gone back to the countryside or dumped them both tbh. She didn't even end up with either of them. It was just an ambiguous ending.

potterhead August 8, 2024 6:03 pm

Super cute story! The characters are good, the plot is simple and there's no unnecessary drama. My only complaint is that it should be longer...!!!

potterhead August 7, 2024 6:27 pm

Cute story, good characters. Overall a nice read. The only thing that kind of bugged me throughout is that she was 13/14 and the guy was 16/17... at this age it's a big gap and a little weird...

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