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"She's doing better... but why do I still feel uneasy?" Because she's not. She's not doing better. Attempting suicide takes a great amount of thought and motivation and effort. This – the way she acts so lifeless and robotic – THIS is rock bottom.
Aghhh, this is so good... it hurts, but I can never turn away a good portrayal of depression... something about the way when authors get the agonizing flurry of confusing emotions that comes with it right.