beta
The story is perfect, with no plot holes so far and used narrative tropes very well!
The characters are great the only one that is very sweet but a bit weird is ML that is IMMEDIATELY AND INEXPLICABLY IN LOVE with FL from the start… but he’s adorable and a himbo and I don’t care ahhaha!
The translation gets better after the first few chapters, so FOR ANYONE STARTING IT… DON’T GIVE UP ON IT!