lokifa

Jinx, painter of the night, legs that won’t walk- the few that has the similar toxic trope yet gets so much traction cause the art is good, and also- toxic storylines are just captivating, like a horror movie. A smutty horror, if u will-

I don’t think anyone supports this or even want it in real life, most of us just want to see how it plays out. the ML feels completely irredeemable in every way, but there is no one else, and the author is known for ‘happy’ endings with the MC & ML ending up together. So it’s fun to see how it goes, eventho so far it’s been a total fucking shitshow in terms of romance hah.

I have zero idea why the side couple had such loooooooooong chapters in between the main story, and then have the ENTIRE side stories dedicated to them. Where’s the main couple epilogue? Why have ZERO epilogue/side story for the first couple we followed throughout? Crazy.
So much that could’ve been done:

Newlyweds phase, Hilarious pregnancy moments- (doyun is so strong, maybe pregnancy is a walk in the park for him, or maybe it’ll be the first time where he feels more vulnerable physically- either way would have the return of his overprotective crying frog faced alpha, which is fun)

Slice of life moments- have a scene where taehyun’s dream comes true, going off to work and seeing his omega & baby wishing him a good day-
Or taeyun having little silly fights with his baby, as two alphas likely would, trying to get doyun’s attention-

Since doyun doesn’t get jealous, maybe a moment where either one of them gets possessive-
Imagine doyun at the park with his son, random omegas and betas assuming he’s an alpha and trying to hit on him-

These are just at the top of my head, there’s literally SO MANY POSSIBILITES for the first couple. This was a cute story, it wrapped up nicely. The second story seems like the author wanted to write alpha x alpha but instead of a different manhwa, the couple’s fked up story is shoehorned into the first couple’s sweet and hilarious story.

7.5/10