
I have no idea what that last page with comments was about other than a doctrine effect on how we should think about this manga but personally i feel the drawing art was amazing and the story was an entertaining introduction that definitely asks for more. I was completely off guard with the last scene which peaked my curiosity on what the story line might give.

Absolutely wonderful Manga. I was not bored once!
Fell inlove with "Totally Captivated" and did not expect better works, I am totally delighted!
I consider this of the same caliber of ZARIA, love it!
How will this ever work out? Will this end in a Threesome?
Or is there an Ominous Feel that someone is about to loose his life?

Sorry but i need an outlet for a bit. Nick A.B. what is up? Why you need to put your name on every picture on every page on every chapter? you have acknowledgement issues? Please , if you want people to appreciate your work you need to make room by not doing it for the people? A simple info on the corner of the first page with SMALL letters will do just fine.
The characters have such a realistic depth, between the lines one would think this is based on true stories.
When you see the main character having to fall so deep in misery and come out so strong ... doesn't his suffering and his path of life give you hope that there is always a way to step into the light?
When you think you are so broken ..there apparantly are always ways to heal.
Loved the art and loved the manga presentation to reflect the story so well.