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im on the twenties chapters and in my opinion the chapters looks kinda rushed(?) i mean there could've been in more communication between them. there's a sex continously between them even if there are no certain relationship –im not saying there can't be sex if there're no certain relationship you know what i mean– plus whatever happens they end up having sex. tbh it got boring for me but i wonder how they'll end up. this isn't that bad, can be read for killing time i guess