I liked the last chapter more than the whole story lmao. Finally he showed that he is actually strong enough to stop anyone from bullying him, it's just that he doesn't mind when the seme does it (for... reasons, I don't get how he fell for him but whatever).
I'm not gonna re-read it but it wasn't that bad, I guess. 2-3 stars to the first 3 chapters, and I would give the 4th 4 stars.
Whoa whoa whoa, I never did that. I hated with my whole being the premise of the story, I only said that because he IS strong and he's not using his strength to resist because he doesn't feel the need to do so (and I don't get why! He should go away from that freaking place asap. The seme is a jerk). I'm re reading my comment and I still can't see why you thought I was blaming him? I'm ALWAYS with the victim, in every story. And I like it when they stand up for themselves, which he did. I'm praising his ability to stop the bullying (even though I wish he did the same to his rapist).
So, sorry, I guess, if you misunderstood?
Masa is an asshole
He honestly was. Probably couldn’t deal with his gay feelings and created the wall between. But it’s completely unrealistic to emotionally hurt someone like that then waltz in 10 years like nothing happened, confess and fall back into bed together so easily. No one should realisticly be “easy” but hey it’s a fictional one shot so you can’t really allow for dramatic realness.