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Plot and dialog could be better I feel like I only know what's going on and can ignore the loose plot of this because there are other books like that so I can interfere what's going on. There is no connection built to any of these characters. Just a "Oh this niggas crazy and that one homeless" smh. along with the facial expressions and character behavior and dialog because the older man gets randomly agressive or mad and the other is just too expressionless but that is a problem in the facial expressions of the art style.
It would of been better if they slept together multiple times then he ushers him to leave with him, and something bad happens where he has to. Because it's giving dumb uncle that's gullible but shouldn't be for the occupation he has. And also build a pass story where if the white guy is crazy then he has been stalking him for years. And the black haired dude should of have way more visits to fathers house to build up that anticipation by the white dude