I love how straightforward it is where a lie or suppressed feelings get resolved in the same chap and isn't dragging out into 5-ect chaps
Oh well , u will not like it on the future arc then ( in novel well, still long way)
Plot and dialog could be better I feel like I only know what's going on and can ignore the loose plot of this because there are other books like that so I can interfere what's going on. There is no connection built to any of these characters. Just a "Oh this niggas crazy and that one homeless" smh. along with the facial expressions and character behavior and dialog because the older man gets randomly agressive or mad and the other is just too expressionless but that is a problem in the facial expressions of the art style.
It would of been better if they slept together multiple times then he ushers him to leave with him, and something bad happens where he has to. Because it's giving dumb uncle that's gullible but shouldn't be for the occupation he has. And also build a pass story where if the white guy is crazy then he has been stalking him for years. And the black haired dude should of have way more visits to fathers house to build up that anticipation by the white dude
Some of yall in these comments need to be checked into the ward. And not in a cute way.. like tf u mean "I'll cut his legs off"
Isn't that romantic?
The art is amazing but us there 2 dif artists? I keep noticing the art shading and lines changing.
As in Like there is one person who draws all the sketches and they color it but someone else sometimes traces over and colors?
Because some panels are so mute toned and the line art is different while the other the lone art is cleaner and the shading as a ray of pink/orange hue.
Also I like seeing Frey getting more dominate, that shit was hot asf. ╮(￣▽￣)╭
I was wondering the same. There’s one panel where the hand was so messed up I was scared it was ai for a sec. lol
The art giving me whiplash.
1. That crusty black haired witch should die.
2. Why does the brother look 60 aside from hair and eyebrows.
3. Why does it end like that? No get back? No fight?
4. I'm confused, if his brother has been cooking for him since he was little.. how do you not recognize your own brother? Also if he became a "Ashtray" after his bros attempted murder then why did he already treat him as a dog after the other dude died?
Don't make me mad bruh.
Overall I really give this a solid 6, I do wish there was a more in depth chapters of the effects of sa to chiwoo especially with the year off. I feel like that would make me truly feel how disgusted and violent jihyun is, of course I don’t like him but I feel like it could of been something because I mainly associate ( no matter if I do this consciously or not) jihyun with the simple fact he is just a dude with anger issues that needs help not over what he did yk? Also defo really wanted background stories on jihyun dad and his brother when he was little since their half siblings and how chiwoo coped with his dad. I didn’t really feel evoked reading this, maybe it’s bcs I’ve already read it but also maybe since there is no actual connection to these characters, the most thing I appreciate in the story psychological development is the fact chiwoo was reminded that of jihyun in kyujin.
I feel like the author knew from the beginning that they didn’t want to make a really long story so they still included the themes but they didn’t concentrate as deeply on them. I still enjoyed the story, but yeah, it could’ve been way better if these themes were treated more